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| Open Poetry #18 |
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Dawning Light |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Dawning Light I’m sitting here watching the stars fade away Watching the birth of another beautiful day In the half-light I trace your face with my eyes And breathe in your softly whispering sighs I wonder if I’ll ever get used to loving you Or will I always feel awed by a love that’s true There’s no sound from outside, the world lies still Lying here with you all my dreams I fulfil As the morning bids farewell to the night And the sky is washed by dawn’s softest light I breathe deep to inhale the scent of your skin Trying to imprint your aroma here within I want to capture it, and hold it inside me So I can conjure up the taste of you truly Just something to get me through my day Until I can again lie with you this way There’s no sound even the birds are asleep And this precious moment is just mine to keep There’s no sun yet it hasn’t graced the skies And no one is awake to hear my sighs As I caress your mouth with my fingertips Before placing butterfly kisses on your lips This dawn is ours, please awake and love me And we'll start our day loving passionately Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 [This message has been edited by Marsha (01-06-2002 09:06 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I can only imagine sharing these butterfly kisses with my dream girl every morning I wake up and kiss her! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you spend every dawn and dusk with loves magic! We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are an angel to us all!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marsha....whewww..very nice...I am sure he will awake...or you will choke him till he does... |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
"I breathe deep to inhale the scent of your skin Trying to imprint your aroma here within I want to capture it, and hold it inside me So I can conjure up the taste of you truly" So softly you have portrayed the heart in its simplest, intimacy... ::sigh:: I know, Marsha.. I know  Lovely work, darlin' girl!!! Hugs, Pepper |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 when no words are needed... |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
"Lying here with you all my dreams I fulfil" Marsha - Really good. The last stanza was great, especially starting your morning off with a little passion. Hey, that is probably why I am not a morning person, I don't get enough passion when I awake. All that I get is the sound of my alarm clock.:bawling One thing, in the first stanza, the second line to the last, I think it might work better if you have a comma between "outside and "the world." Just a tiny suggestion.  Dave |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - wake that man up, wake that man up! For he doesn't know what he is missing, or does he???? BC |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Hot, Spicy and Passionate..........  Isn't love wonderful? Your poem sure is! copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh yes,...wake him up in the most sensual way you can think of. I love this poem.....it is steaming with sensuality. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy thank you so much that is a very sweet thing to say. You really are too too kind. You always are to me Thank you as always  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy, I wouldn't dream of it. I wake him with some soft sensuality, which is guaranteed to get the day off to a good start Thank you muchly I'm pleased you liked it, YOU did didn't you? Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Pepper darling girl thank you so much I knew YOU would understand, it is exactly like that. Trying to hold on to those special moments. Take care of you because YOU are a poet of superior emotions. YOU are a wonderful writer Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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