Open Poetry #18 |
Hold OUt Your Hands |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Hold Out Your Hands Hold out your hands and cup the words I am about to write For they will sprout you silver wings to soar you into night The stars and moon will recognize a verse inspired by them And swirl the phrases ‘round the universe and back again The heavens love to listen to a verse of rhythmic rhyme Which stars inscroll in nighttime skies for all the rest of time Cup your hands and let the tender phrases overflow And then, my love, both you and heaven my deepest love will know Elizabeth Santos |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever wrap your arms around true love and feel the inspiration of beauty encircle you! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
OOH soooo lovely Elizabeth. so so sweet. I love the idea of cupping the hands .Floria |
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~lewisone~ Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 91Virginia |
Elizabeth this is simply beautiful! Enjoyed so much, thanks for sharing.... ~lewisone~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I stand with hands cupped waiting for love's flow to start. I tenderly catch them, the words from your heart! Oh that was too sweet! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Leaving smiles in your wake, m'dear.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you touch me! Kathleen-- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Elizabeth....perfectly beautiful!....Hugs, Nancy ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Liz, Short and sweet. Very romantic indeed! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Elizabeth...Superb....the flow and cadence complemented the powerful words....Nicely done... |
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