Open Poetry #18 |
Can You |
heather_kitn Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 61In The Kokapelli's Song |
As grander leaves shall fall will you still challenge my love. When fair skies slowly darken and rain falls from above, can you slowly close your eyes, and in acceptance, tilt your head. Let the pain be cleansed away remembering what we said... As we succomb into the darkness of those things that cannot be. If the night brings with it demons can you fight them all with me. Will you take my hand and lead then allow me for a time, until we beat this thing together and life turns on a dime... As the harvest moon shines down in all its crimson glory, will you dance in celebration for the beginning of our story. Can we turn away the past that has haunted us thus far-- live our life with no regrets and love him from afar... As grander leaves shall fall will you still challenge my love. When dark skies slowly lighten and the sun shines from above can you slowly open your eyes take the hand I offer you and love me without fear the way we were meant to. -heather |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all wish you the greatest happiness and hope that he can see the love you have for him and love you without fear! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may your questions be answered with love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heather, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-05-2002 12:04 PM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I really like this, Heather, it's soft, delicate, romantic. Kathleen-- |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Heather...This just so lovely. Sometimes, trust has to be built step by step. ***Ivy Rose |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is very very nice heather.Nice sentiment and good work. floria |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like someone inside my head...nicely done |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
heather_kitn - well written, and well said. The first of yours I've read, and glad that I stopped by... BC |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
wonderfully written, heather.... nice to meet a fellow Northern Virginian on the blue pages... do you know of any local poetry readings? if so, email me, ok? thanks! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed Heather, a beautifully penned piece. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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