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Open Poetry #18

senyru/haiku???

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-05 11:34 AM

whispers, giggles, sighs
the nature of man in song
laughter in the night

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-05 11:40 AM

Oooooooohhhhh...this is a senryu, and what a lovely senryu it is, it too gave me the giggles! (smiles) Yep, when they get off of work and enjoy the night, it can be such a treat indeed! (giggles) I love it, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2002-01-05 11:48 AM

adorable Virginia...yes a senyru, although you did mention nature..i would still say a senyru..loved it.. hugs

~Victoria

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

3 posted 2002-01-05 01:45 PM

VERY IMPRESSIVE!!!! This is definitely senryu because it deals with the human emotions rather than emotions through nature. REALLY ENJOYED THIS!!! ***Ivy Rose

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