Until the Stars - Marsha's challenge

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

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Victoria Australia

0 posted 2002-01-05 06:44 AM

Until the stars grow dark my love
And there is no more day, I say
When there's no light from high above
Our love abides and still hold's sway
The light will shine from eyes that charm
I'll hold you in my tender arms

And when the seas are dried to dust
The oceans' pull is kept by pride
You are yet there filled by my trust
Till seasons end; here I'll abide
For my drab world within your heart
Begins and ends and makes new start

And when the air catches on fire
To sear the lungs and take the heat
My thirst is quenched by your desire
I need naught else when our hearts meet
Throughout all life and endless time
I'll be around... if you'll be mine

For you my love can light the sky
I need no other star but you
And should the oceans all run dry
I'll take our sweat, build them anew
When air is gone in burning up
I'll breathe of you from passions cup

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-01-05 07:29 AM

Keth, you keep picking up these challenges, y'hear...so I can just sit back and enjoy? Marsha's going to be very pleased with this...

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-01-05 09:35 AM

Keth darling sister of my soul and holder of my dreams, This is utterly UTTERLY amazing.
Question belover sister mine, Why are you soooooooooo outstandingly good? Is it really necessary to cap every little thing I do. You leave me wallowing in the shallows while you are scuba diving off the Great Barrier Reef.

You know I love this of course, I would say you have met the challenge magnificently

What can I say except this is going into my library. Thank you for the pleasure this brings today and will continue to bring. It'll sit in my libary and I won't need lights, this will illumine the whole place.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2002-01-05 09:48 AM

This is just lovely, Kethry. I enjoyed reading this all the way to the end.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-05 05:15 PM

(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know Marsha loves this so very much like I do! (big hugggsssssss) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2002-01-05 05:18 PM

nice

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-05 05:23 PM

Kethry, this is simply lovely. floria

wolf
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 10
Hamilton (Steeltown)

7 posted 2002-01-05 05:28 PM

A teriffic poem with choice words of dreamlike quality.

very very good.

it's the soul afraid of dying , that never learns to live.

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-01-05 06:00 PM

Absolutely gorgeous imagery, Keth.
I especially loved these words

"And when the seas are dried to dust
The oceans' pull is kept by pride
You are yet there filled by my trust
Till seasons end; here I'll abide
For my drab world within your heart
Begins and ends and makes new start"

Beautifully written.