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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-02-14 12:27 PM



Cupid shot a Love arrow
but it missed the intended
and somehow hit me!
Now I am lost in the
Sea of Tranquility,
moonbeams and starlight
are all that I see.
You really must watch out
where that Love arrow flies
and be careful,
it's covered in
poetic disguise,
with words of rhyming,
Cupid's got me climbing
Love's highest tree.
And at the top,
is my best friend,
Jaime.
Hi Me!





© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-02-14 12:30 PM


Really sweet, Kacy.....Happy Valentines Day to you.

The problem with cupid is that he's just a little baby and can't aim that well!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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2 posted 2002-02-14 12:32 PM


BRAVO!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! Jaime is so very lucky to have someone like you care so much about him....he is a wonderful man and I am so pleased by the way you write this...STANDING OVATION....**big big hugs** to you both....*sigh* I so love love and am so happy when it happens to people I care about....*sigh*   thank you...this is just the kind of thing I needed to read tonight...HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY TO YOU BOTH

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (02-14-2002 12:32 AM).]

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3 posted 2002-02-14 12:33 PM


~* Happy Valentine's Day to you and Jaime *~ and he couldn't have been more on target

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes.  
Let the reader catch their own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~


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4 posted 2002-02-14 12:36 PM


You are a hoot, your title had me laughing
before I ever got to reading.
(and I really need to laugh right now)
It's no easy job trying to dodge those arrows.  
This was so much fun Midnitesun.

I hope your day is a special one.

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5 posted 2002-02-14 12:39 PM


How you guys all reply so fast? I barely hit the submit key, went to send it as an email poem, and PRESTO! I came back and three replies!
Thanks to you, Lyra, for your sweet reply and that cute picture!
And Karen, thank you very, very much. I hope he gets to read it tonight!
Sharon, hugs, and thank you. Just when I thought I was done for good with all that cupid business, that arrow hit me.  

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6 posted 2002-02-14 12:41 PM


Blues, thanks. I got a laugh at your reply, so we're even. Hope you have a fun day too.
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7 posted 2002-02-14 12:50 PM


Kacy,
Up a tree without a what? So didn't he hit your heart? Too funny!

Midnitesun
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8 posted 2002-02-14 01:07 AM


LOL at your reply, Larry. Guess I forgot my shield that day.
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9 posted 2002-02-14 12:40 PM


Well, Kacy...I've been so wrapped up in my own little love story that I musta missed something here!!!!  My best to you and Jaime.  And yes, the love reporter you shall be!
(btw...I sent her flowers, she loves 'em)  
Happy Valentines, Kacy!  

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10 posted 2002-02-14 01:24 PM


Happy Valentines Day to you and Jaime!
Sending lots of love you way!

RP

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11 posted 2002-02-14 05:37 PM


Duncan, LOL, of course you are 'wrapped up" Have a fun day, and here are cyber kisses to you and Tracey both. and
Rose Petals, you have a great day too. I'll bet you got a card from Noah.

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