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The Red Rose
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The Red Rose |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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The Red Rose The redness of the rose represents all my love It is steadfast and pure as my love for you Blood red is my heart beat each drop filled with passion Filling my veins with life as your love fills my heart Deep red are my feelings of undying desire Ever reaching outward to feel your strong embrace Red, the taste of my kiss melting into your love Drinking of the sweet wine that delights our senses Bright red are burning fires that flame for your soft touch A need to be consumed by the pleasure we share My love, a bright red rose showing the depth of me Take me into your arms and kiss me with red love Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Karen, You're gonna make some guy so lucky one day chickie  I really like this ..  Happy Valentine's Day Karen Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You arrange the most delightful bouquet with your words Startime. They are always so lovely. Happy Valentine's Day! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was a Valentine's poem - loved it! The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh yes, this is great stuff! Happy Love Day to you |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Karen, you write sooooo beautifully. And roses are such lovely flowers. I wish you a garden of roses right outside an open window in the Springtime mist. Happy Valentine's day. ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And how appropriate for the day...that you are even wearing red! Happy Valentine's Day to you! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Karen - you are a romantic, and it shows when you write. A most warm compliment from me... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lady, I agree with BC...you are a true romantic....coming from two of them...he and me... Beautiful poem... enjoyed a lot.. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Startime, this is absolutely warming...more ways than one! I loved it! Well done! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely....happy day... Lauren~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So many roses we have in our heart. And where are the men that are bringing us the real ones?? Sheesh. Love this Karen. Happy V Day |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
" Bright red are burning fires that flame for your soft touch A need to be consumed by the pleasure we share" Talk about feeding the flames ! Love's pleasure pyre ! Keep those fires burning, Karen . . . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Somebody's got some good kissin' waiting for them...James |
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