Open Poetry #18 |
Tender is the Heart |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Tender is the Heart Fragile is the rose’s bloom, it’s petal plush and fine Sweet the honeysuckle grows on dainty flowering vine Stately is the lily’s stem but fragile are its folds Tender is a heart that has these silent gifts to hold Red the wing of cardinal as it opens wide for me Blue and white the blue jay wing in rhododendron tree Yellow is the warbler in the holly by the shed Tender is the heart that swells in flush of cardinal red Purple is the dawning sky that wakes a tearful eye Bright the beaming fires that burn in height of midday sky Soft the twilight hour when blue-gray shadows slowly creep Tender is the heart that needs a starlit dream to sleep Fragile are the moments that can tear the page of trust Sweet and dainty are the words for which the flower lusts Stately the demeanor of the bloom that stands apart Strong the spirit’s inner core, but tender is the heart Elizabeth Santos |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow! Words fail me! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Lady Santos, what a song...I do believe, this one should be put to music...it flows so well... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you always paint such colors of love through all your soft words! (kiss on cheek) You are a sweet rose to us all, sweet friend, your heart blooms with heavenly love! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!!!!! You are right up there with the masters of old. You write sonnets masterfully and with such incredible beauty. ***Ivy Rose |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fabulous expression, Elizabeth! You never disappoint with your beautiful poetry! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Few could write this better...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I'd say none could write this better. Love Sy |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I was there, I saw it all, I felt it all, and Elizabeth your last verses always blow me away..this was wonderful, full of meaning, and the visuals are beautiful.Floria |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Tender is the heart, indeed Liz.....beautiful phrasing in this one. "Starlit dream" especially stood out. Well done. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know how much I love art and this painted the most beautiful picture I have seen in a long time, how do you do that? It flows with such ease and grace, and the picture you paint is so vivid. Exquisitive Liz. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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