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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
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Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2002-02-13 10:13 PM



With out held hands, she offers,
all she has to give.
Her heart, her soul to him,
He is her reason to live.

But her gift is unwanted.
What else can she do ?
She with draws her hands in despair.
Softly whispers...
"Happy Valentines Day to you" !

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2002 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
1 posted 2002-02-13 11:19 PM


This is so sad.  I am surprised no one responded.  

Many are in this same boat these days I am sure.

Larry C
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2 posted 2002-02-13 11:21 PM


Kitty,
You're breaking my heart. Hopefully yours isn't broken too! Bittersweet poetry very well written.

Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
3 posted 2002-02-13 11:28 PM


amusemi:
The boat you speak of is full but there is always room for one more...
NOT a pleasant thought...

Larry: Yep ! you got it..My heart was broken
just a little while ago. Hence the poem...It helps to write.

Thank you both for reading and responding.

Kitty

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

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