Glimmer of Eyes in Shine (Valentine Challenge)

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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-02-13 08:13 PM

Softness of a breeze over silken skin
Warmth of fire which burns within.
Shimmer of eyes that look into mine
Let all this be you, my Valentine.

Love's whispers as our song is sung
Glowing heart flings that were flung.
Beauty pure and so radiantly fine.
Visions pure of you...my Valentine.

Glances afar from across the room
Feelings that made two hearts zoom.
Notes passed through air that flew.
My Valentine, yes dear, only you!

Walks about a beach of soft sand
as we slowly stroll, hand in hand
Kisses shared of love's finest wine
Please....please...my Valentine

Moon casting a silver glow
into eyes as each says “I Know”
Glimmer of passions now in shine
as entwined hearts beat in line.

You...me...a wish..Our Valentine!

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-02-13 08:17 PM

Barry, this is a beautiful Valentine.

sky

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-02-13 08:22 PM

BIG OLE SIGH COMING FROM UP HERE IN CANADA!!
~Hugs to you Barry~

~Love transcends time and space~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-13 08:23 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever see the softness of the breeze in her eyes and forever sing with the beauty of love and make everyday like Valentines Day! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is absolutely breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-02-13 08:28 PM

I do believe this is one of the loveliest valentines I have seen in a long time...well done, Sir...

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

5 posted 2002-02-13 08:30 PM

Barry, you have done it here my friend

This is a special Valentine gift here....

~~Jeff~~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-02-13 08:41 PM

i love this one barry...happy valentines day to ya...you lovey dovey guy you

~Vic

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-02-13 08:44 PM

Beautiful, romantic and touching.
A perfect valentine poem, Barry.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

8 posted 2002-02-13 08:44 PM

She will absolutely melt when she reads it. Terrific write Magnus.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-02-13 10:13 PM

You will have to someday tell me your secret to such a romantic marriage. Another beautiful poem, Happy Valentines Day.
Sandra

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

10 posted 2002-02-14 01:46 AM

*sigh* Oh gosh...Lou is going to melt when she reads this one....Stunning....marvelous...so sensually romantic..**big hugs**

HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2002-02-14 09:12 AM

Barry~

very romantic, sensual....I know your Valentine will love this....Have a good day...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-14-2002 09:12 AM).]

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2002-02-14 10:01 AM

enjoy

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

13 posted 2002-02-14 01:45 PM

this romantic poem will make every woman light up with joy!

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