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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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0 posted 2002-02-13 04:20 PM

I want nothing less than perfect trust--
the meet of eyes in understanding.
smiles, to share a joke in blush,
(fingers yearn a hand in holding)
comfortable, in comfort, hush...

The feeling met, when he is there,
my missing half, I've met, aware,
to give myself without diminish--
I speak--he finishes my sentence--
Both, delighted and amazed.

Excitement--knowing that therein,
is no beginning and no end--
to have my passion be my friend,
with he in me, and I in him.

* * *

(repost from Open #7)

[This message has been edited by serenity (02-13-2002 04:21 PM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-02-13 04:23 PM

serenity,
a perfect poem for the challenge. Well met!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-02-13 04:24 PM

A wonderful request. May it always be yours.

-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2002-02-13 04:29 PM

"to have my passion be my friend,"

*sigh*

I love that line

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-02-13 06:21 PM

The feeling met, when he is there,
my missing half, I've met, aware,
to give myself without diminish--
I speak--he finishes my sentence--
Both, delighted and amazed.
=====================================

yes....exactly ...twin flames

if he has a brother...we can quad LOL
ummmmm...that didnt come out right..ROFL

love the longing in this lovie
Happy V DAY ...

Some find subtlety in strangers,
some find subtlety in alone.
Your eyes, you see everything,
my eyes, I see it all together now ... and I know.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-02-13 06:57 PM

LOL@JM's response.
This I love Karen....just wish I knew what the challenge was...I must have missed it. I'll go back a couple of pages and look.
Nice work here!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

6 posted 2002-02-13 07:01 PM

*sigh...something we'd all like to have I think!

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2002-02-13 07:32 PM

The feeling met, when he is there,
my missing half, I've met, aware,
to give myself without diminish--
I speak--he finishes my sentence--
Both, delighted and amazed.

Happy Valentine's Day, Karen! Love that line about finishing my sentences.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-02-13 08:04 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too need to find that challenge! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

9 posted 2002-02-13 10:31 PM

gotta love a gal that doesn't ask for much! Would you settle for M&M;s?

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