Open Poetry #18 |
. . . Explosion . . . Senryu string |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
candelight caress passion's dance is evolving begun with a kiss ~*~ desires are aflame eyes limpid pools in the heat I would drown in them ~*~ welcome bindery bound by passion's hot demands by choice we unite ~*~ lost to the moment passion is love's explosion one, yet two in love Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (02-14-2002 09:26 AM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Ooooooo! Interloper. You steal my heart. Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Interloper, Oh how I love your writing It is always a treat to read your Senryus and Tankas and Haikus. Thank you for sharing.. I loveeeeee them Happy Valentine's Day Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh yes...can't get enough of that loving feeling you do these sooo wonderfully |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
passions to release started by a single kiss building with desire *sigh* the passion of your words always leads me to Love's Explosion....**big hugs** HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY *giggling* you are certainly no phantom...there is too much heat in you to ever think you were just the shadow of a dream. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (02-13-2002 02:40 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
With the title you offered, one could come in to read this expecting just about anything and yet... you delved deep to caress true meaning with this one, Sir. Very well done, indeed! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Perfect Valetine Poem Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
passion explodes bright lustrous in french silk rhythm melting a sweetheart Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, we all wish you the happiest and loveliest Valentines Day from the bottom of our hearts, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
love these!! you do romance beautifully |
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