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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2002-02-13 02:11 PM

~* Her Promise Of Spring *~
@Mysteria 2/2002

Play Someday Soon Song

I see her dancing with the buds of waiting.
She steps and turns in her elegant flourish,
shaping our dreams in forest green,
sprouting shoots of hyacinth, snowdrops,
and making room for tulips and daffodils.

Her delicate fingers cup their
budding faces as she whispers secrets
into their blossoming ears.
She wraps her arms around a barren
tree creating the birth of its fruit.

Her long train captures debris
left in neglect on shores of oceans,
and she gently kisses the shoreline
giving it life once more.

This long awaited visitor of beauty
skips on the green and velvet hereafters,
atop the crabgrass and dandelions.
And for a single moment I see
all of her promises of spring.

~*~

art: Alberto Panchorbo
http://www.aproposfineart.com/pancorbo.html

music: "Someday Soon" from Bruce DeBoer's latest album "Pieces of My Heart"
http://www.geocities.com/Vienna/7189/

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes.
Let the reader catch their own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (02-13-2002 02:28 PM).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-02-13 02:13 PM

Beautiful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-02-13 02:29 PM

I like this SO much!!! The pic above it is also soo beautiful, it enhances your lovely poem. (hugs)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-02-13 03:33 PM

Please send her right after the Iditarod. Early April would be nice.

Glad to see your muse back in business.

Flutterwings
Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 288
Maine

4 posted 2002-02-13 03:40 PM

Everything bloomed around me as I read this
creation of poetic vision.

Your muse is alive with the sound of new life in Sprintime.

Applause! Applause!

Maggie ((~.~))

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-02-13 03:48 PM

I do believe I have to start a whole new wing in my library, just to hold an aisle of Special Keepers...

for this surely belongs there...

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2002-02-13 04:06 PM

Hello Sharon

Stunning images you have portrayed here. This was simply beautiful.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-02-13 04:20 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love the spring so so much! (kiss on cheek) Flowers fill your gorgeous words with springs sunshine, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2002-02-13 04:43 PM

I am so ready for spring

this is beautiful, and I love the picture!!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2002-02-13 04:55 PM

Ahh did anyone ever tell you guys that you can take a dreary day for a soul that is walking with their head down, and make them smile from ear to ear? Well I am teling you now! Thank you all for reading this one, isn't she just beautiful? Art is truly an inspiration t me.

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes.
Let the reader catch their own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~

Midnight Writer
Junior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 28
Texas

10 posted 2002-02-13 05:10 PM

Mysteria,
Thank you for inviting me to this forum- I'm sure I'll love it. By the way, your new poem is quite lovely.

Cathlyn

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2002-02-13 05:42 PM

enjoy

Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

12 posted 2002-02-13 05:55 PM

Sharon this was stunning- you have such a flair for art and music and the words always match so well. Yes, dear.. spring is right around the corner. My love, Kate

"At this point in my life I'd like
to live as if only love mattered.."
Tracy Chapman

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2002-02-13 06:34 PM

Sharon, exquisite piece of work here and the picture really compliments it. Enjoyed!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

14 posted 2002-02-13 07:21 PM

Her delicate fingers cup their
budding faces as she whispers secrets
into their blossoming ears.
She wraps her arms around a barren
tree creating the birth of its fruit.

Her long train captures debris
left in neglect on shores of oceans,
and she gently kisses the shoreline
giving it life once more
================================

I was thinking this beauty of healing and rebirth could be a Willow poem as well...
your presentations are always so lovely...so polished and done to poetic perfection...sight and sound you touch all our senses

Beautiful Sharon.
jm

Some find subtlety in strangers,
some find subtlety in alone.
Your eyes, you see everything,
my eyes, I see it all together now ... and I know.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

15 posted 2002-02-14 12:01 PM

Cathlyn ~ Oh you found us! Welcome to Passions and I hope everyone will go and check out your wonderful website. I am looking so forward to seeing you post here. Thanks for coming and joining.

Vandana ~ Thank you so much.

Kate ~

cause I picked the picture first this time for Willow's Sunday poem. Thanks dear friend.

Nancy ~ Your opinion means a lot to me, thank you.

JM ~ It was for her, and thank you for even connecting that it could have been. The cherry or plum (not sure) trees are all in bud here, and of course it created the memory of how much she used to love them here. Thank you for your heart.

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

16 posted 2002-02-14 02:37 AM

Lovely..simply lovely...enjoyed.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2002-02-14 03:26 PM

Shhhhhhhhh. *G* Around here, spring usually lasts only a moment before summer's heat and humidity wring the very life from us. *S* But what a glorious moment it is. *S*

This is beautiful, Mysteria... your words paint the promise of renewal exquisitely. *S*

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

18 posted 2002-02-14 05:59 PM

BRAVO!, Poetess of grace
Liz

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