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Velvet Words |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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His voice was the velvet in champagne flowing like a river of passion upon the wilted lilies of my heart winding like raging blood through my veins Oh! to dance naked with him in the rain his lips were cashmere to the touch drawing me in like the tides flowing like Rapunsels golden hair dripping down the tower of night slippery as the silken mane of moonlight he was my warm blooded Valentino in the gondola of my dreams we would float in a desert or a canal, who cares anyhow he was everything in the world to me "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." ~ David Viscott [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-05-2002 05:54 PM).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
This ain't no velvet elvis- cuz- This is soft AND pretty-- well done Victoria There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Victoria, your words always flow like the feel of fine velvet..very nice...very gentle smile |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Liked this...loved the last two lines...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, soft and lovely. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hi,  jamie, logan, james, and kethryim happy you stopped by for a visit..  ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the Valentino of your dreams forever pull you out of your tower and carry you to paradise and eternal happiness! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
MUCH BEAUTY IN THIS POEM. Your words are carefully and skillfully chosen. Enjoyed this very much. ***Ivy Rose |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Victoria, A lovely poem from a lovely poetess. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
very warm wonderful poem. floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
noah, ivy, sy, and floria..  thank you for taking time to visit this afternoon...hope you enjoyed the cookies i left for you ha..  ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is very softly engaging. And the last 2 lines, they say it all, don't they. Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this had a fleeting sadness to it, Victoria, enjoyed muchly Kathleen-- |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hey there..glad you stopped by stranger hugs~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Katheen...love hearing from you hugsss ~Vic |
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