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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-02-13 11:15 AM


“VALENTINES SOMETHING”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Wanted a sweetheart,
for this special day…
Looked all over the place,
someone, to come my way…

Searched high, searched low,
the alley too, don’t know why…
Thought I might find you,
nobody there, I can clarify…

My heart slipping and sliding,
thoughts hoping with wishes…
To meet someone to hold,
with all her soft kisses…

Just a valentines something,
I don’t ask for very much…
A warm card would even do,
perhaps my heart, to touch…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-02-13 11:20 AM


~soft kisses~ sent your way
you are not forgotten
come Valentine's Day...


M

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-02-13 11:25 AM


Ah Bill....I can be your secret Valentine is you want?!
Or a Valentine by proxy?  Like a stand-in?
This is sad and full of longing....well done.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

strbbux
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3 posted 2002-02-13 11:30 AM


Very well done Bill. Will a hug do? ((((hugs)))) for you on Valentines day. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

sodpossom
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4 posted 2002-02-13 11:39 AM


I'm not going to kiss or hug you but I will say a very nice write!
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-02-13 01:09 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Bill, this is so very sad, I know just how you feel, for the first time in my life I have a Valentine, but I want to meet her so badly and all I wanted was somebody to hug me so I can feel her heart beat to mine! (sad sigh) Oh Bill, here are some extra big hugs for you! (EXTRA BIG HUGS) I may not be your Valentine, but I will always be your dearest friend and w eall love you so so much, all our thoughts are with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Larry C
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6 posted 2002-02-13 01:13 PM


Bill,
Sorry...I can't picture you desparate. Come to think of it...I can't think of you as being alone. Okay, where is cupid? Sounds like a PIPs project to me! :< Be careful what you wish for, friend.

Startime
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7 posted 2002-02-13 01:38 PM


I am sure cupid will put her in your arms where she belongs and you both will share all the love you have to offer each other...Wonderful Valentine's poem, Bill...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (02-13-2002 04:36 PM).]

RosePetal
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8 posted 2002-02-13 01:41 PM


aw Bill, you know I luv ya
(hugs) nicely written

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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2002-02-13 02:12 PM


Bill, have you read "Acres of Diamonds?"  

catalinamoon
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10 posted 2002-02-13 02:40 PM


I'm in the same spot, Bill. I was waiting, and no one ever showed up. Ha Ha, we have one day to go, a miracle could always happen.
Sending Valetine Hugs.
Sandra

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11 posted 2002-02-13 03:29 PM


I feel the same as you and the way i carry on is to remember that: there are people in the world that love you so much they would die for you who you don't even know exsist. And one day they will show themselves and then you should never let go.
    Be happy on valentines day and make sure you smile at everyone you pass on the street because you never know who might smile back at you!


Kethry
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Victoria Australia
12 posted 2002-02-13 04:31 PM


Bill,
Will you be my valentine?
We can talk and drink some wine
spend some time, outside of space
while we search each other's face
whisper words so soft and true
join in melding we won't rue
hold onto the joy we share
whisper love and I'll be there
kisses wafted in the night
would help us us share our love's delight
we could be much more than friends
on this day that never ends
Bill my love will you be mine
go from friend to Valentine.

Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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13 posted 2002-02-13 04:48 PM


Dear Bill~


Happy
Valentines Day~






Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart


[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-13-2002 11:39 PM).]

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