Open Poetry #18 |
Valentines Something |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“VALENTINES SOMETHING” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Wanted a sweetheart, for this special day… Looked all over the place, someone, to come my way… Searched high, searched low, the alley too, don’t know why… Thought I might find you, nobody there, I can clarify… My heart slipping and sliding, thoughts hoping with wishes… To meet someone to hold, with all her soft kisses… Just a valentines something, I don’t ask for very much… A warm card would even do, perhaps my heart, to touch… ~~~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~soft kisses~ sent your way you are not forgotten come Valentine's Day... M "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Bill....I can be your secret Valentine is you want?! Or a Valentine by proxy? Like a stand-in? This is sad and full of longing....well done. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very well done Bill. Will a hug do? ((((hugs)))) for you on Valentines day. floria Floria |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
I'm not going to kiss or hug you but I will say a very nice write! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Bill, this is so very sad, I know just how you feel, for the first time in my life I have a Valentine, but I want to meet her so badly and all I wanted was somebody to hug me so I can feel her heart beat to mine! (sad sigh) Oh Bill, here are some extra big hugs for you! (EXTRA BIG HUGS) I may not be your Valentine, but I will always be your dearest friend and w eall love you so so much, all our thoughts are with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, Sorry...I can't picture you desparate. Come to think of it...I can't think of you as being alone. Okay, where is cupid? Sounds like a PIPs project to me! :< Be careful what you wish for, friend. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I am sure cupid will put her in your arms where she belongs and you both will share all the love you have to offer each other...Wonderful Valentine's poem, Bill...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (02-13-2002 04:36 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
aw Bill, you know I luv ya (hugs) nicely written |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Bill, have you read "Acres of Diamonds?" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I'm in the same spot, Bill. I was waiting, and no one ever showed up. Ha Ha, we have one day to go, a miracle could always happen. Sending Valetine Hugs. Sandra |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
I feel the same as you and the way i carry on is to remember that: there are people in the world that love you so much they would die for you who you don't even know exsist. And one day they will show themselves and then you should never let go. Be happy on valentines day and make sure you smile at everyone you pass on the street because you never know who might smile back at you! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, Will you be my valentine? We can talk and drink some wine spend some time, outside of space while we search each other's face whisper words so soft and true join in melding we won't rue hold onto the joy we share whisper love and I'll be there kisses wafted in the night would help us us share our love's delight we could be much more than friends on this day that never ends Bill my love will you be mine go from friend to Valentine. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Dear Bill~ Happy Valentines Day~ Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-13-2002 11:39 PM).] |
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