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Alicethruglass
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since 2001-06-19
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0 posted 2002-02-13 10:42 AM


Come Tomorrow

In shattered glass, remains
yesterdays splintering
of all tomorrows.

Words have begun to fail.
Promises have bankrupt my resources,
depleted emotions.
Even the pen weakens, the ink blurs.
Perception smudged,
life becomes tarnished, fouled.

The end nears,
final words to be left behind,
forever a silent gift,
in absentia...
come tomorrow.

[This message has been edited by Alicethruglass (02-13-2002 01:55 PM).]
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marya2
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since 2002-02-13
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1 posted 2002-02-13 11:21 AM

this has a sense of tragedy to it.  almost Poe like.

marya
Alicethruglass
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since 2001-06-19
Posts 368
2 posted 2002-02-14 08:03 AM

thank you for the Poe-like,  he is my favorite..and living near Baltimore, I have been to his crypt.

~A
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