For Mark - A very old challenge revisited....

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Dee
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Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-13 05:29 AM

To see the challenge I am talking about go waaay back to here.

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Pen and quill
   mixed with passions ink
   makes the poets swill
   that we all drink.
Lover's fervour
   from this poet's pen
   drawn to read over
   and over again.
Turn of phrase
   that touches each one.
   No sweet lover's phase
   will be left undone.
Joy or tears
   of each precious line
   will allay the fears
   in this heart of mine.

For Mark - with thanks for all that you have written. Your words are a treasure and an inspiration.
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

[This message has been edited by Dee (02-13-2002 05:57 AM).]

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

1 posted 2002-02-13 06:26 AM

Well met I'd say! Just like a fine wine, it can't be hurried!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Dee
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Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2002-02-13 07:19 AM

Eddie, are you saying that I am like a fine wine and I should be drunk? lol
Glad you liked this one. Your thoughts mean a lot to me.

Dee

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Janet Marie
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3 posted 2002-02-13 06:06 PM

This is lovely Dee....when Martie reposted hers yesterday, i couldnt recall the exact challenge...so thanks for refreshing my mothy mind

There was so many wonderful poems posted to these phrases...the forum was flooded.
Mark will be thrilled you found your inspiration in the challenge all this time later.
Well done groovy-girlie

Some find subtlety in strangers,
some find subtlety in alone.
Your eyes, you see everything,
my eyes, I see it all together now ... and I know.

strbbux
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4 posted 2002-02-13 06:19 PM

Very very nice indeed,

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Dee
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Queensland, Australia

5 posted 2002-02-13 06:37 PM

Janet, it is not hard to be inspired by Mark's phrases, they are beautiful.

Floria, thank you for taking the time.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

SEA

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with you

6 posted 2002-02-13 09:52 PM

"Turn of phrase
   that touches each one.
   No sweet lover's phase
   will be left undone."

Dee, this is wonderful!!!
I love this part.....

Balladeer

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7 posted 2002-02-13 10:15 PM

We certainly drink our fill of swill here and your swill is swell!

Dee
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Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

8 posted 2002-02-13 10:56 PM

Sue, I am glad you chose one of my verses as your fav and not Mark's. Lol. I think that one describes his poetry well.

'Deer, glad you like my swill.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

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