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John Yaws
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2002-02-12 08:06 PM

I'm sitting here, just thinking-
Wishing I could turn back time.
Maybe twenty years or so,
When I was in my prime.

You were rather young then-
But that would be okay,
I think I'd try to win you-
And then take you away.

Way up in the mountains-
Belwo the timber line...
And build a cozy cabin,
'Twould be just yours and mine.

There you could learn to love me-
I really think you could.
And as you knew me better,
I'm certain that you would.

Children, if you wanted-
I'd teach them how to live...
As one with nature's wildness-
She has so much to give.

We'd spend our lives together-
Till parted by my death...
I'd whisper, "I still love you."
With my final, fading breath.

akela
Junior Member

since 2002-02-05

Posts 15
croydon england

1 posted 2002-02-12 08:11 PM

i just popped in for a quick read and there you are right on the top perfect timing i do so love to read you work a beautiful write as always

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-02-12 08:18 PM

John, very nice...don't we all wish for
that at times...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-02-21 03:31 AM

This reminds me of a women in my past...though we are long separated now I still have some special feelings for her...James

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-02-21 09:47 PM

i like this, it could be a nice song!
cowboy take me away.....

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

5 posted 2002-02-22 11:03 AM

i liked this. Not even death can overcome true love.. nothing can

God alone is alone. Man is not.

whipsnade
Junior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 40

6 posted 2002-02-22 10:57 PM

    gunslinger
have been away from the forums for some time and just browsing. Came across this meaningful expression of opportunity missed with its intrinsic heartache and mellowed affection and feel simpatico.. well done sir:
  All the  while listening to Bobby  Mcferrins  rendition  of "Common Threads" from the TV series "Northern Exposure"
  Recommend it...
      best regards,, whipsnade  {ricardo}

Spirit Of Twilight
Member

since 2002-01-11

Posts 116
India

7 posted 2002-02-23 08:35 AM

I love your poem. It is beautiful.
Neha

Lisa_bebe15
Member

since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

8 posted 2002-02-23 08:56 PM

I love that..I am only 15..but wish I could turn back time for 5mths..and get my x-b/f back..
Lisa Ann

"Water Over Matter"

BtwnRockandHardPlace
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 98
NJ, USA

9 posted 2002-03-01 09:12 PM

gosh that was beautiful. thank you!

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