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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-02-12 07:59 PM

Listen to the softness of water flowing
of flowers that bloom, of love growing
of sighs born of love in silence fill
of the lonely call of distant whip-o-will

Stars that streak from the skies clear
in vision of night cold, dark and sheer
Kisses smothering lips with delight
as gleam of eyes brighten the night.

Touches that chill skin soft and warm
feeling of comfort from within arms
Treasures of passion new and explored
as journeys of love does a river ford.

Chaste not upon the moon hugging low
lest the night dwindle and romance go.
Give into the soft and echoing sighs
as love shines bright within the eyes.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-02-12 08:02 PM

Beautiful Magnus, I love your word usage in this one, very nicely done, Wonderful thoughts.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

brianbeaudry
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since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

2 posted 2002-02-12 08:07 PM

Romantic and sensual...the night sky so amplifies passions!! well done my friend!!!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-02-12 08:11 PM

Floria, thank you...hard to post much
trying to get two kids to bed...glad you
liked this...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-02-12 08:11 PM

Bb...thank you, always enjoy your thoughts..

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-12 08:12 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me sigh! (big hugggssssss) May the light and softness of tender love forever fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-02-12 08:14 PM

Thank you Noah...BTW...liked the duet with BC. was cute...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-02-12 08:17 PM

Barry, low moon, full moon, harvest moon, new moon....no moon...you ALWAYS cause me to *sigh*.

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-02-12 08:19 PM

Thanx Nancy....Big Big Hugs....glad you
liked it...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

9 posted 2002-02-12 08:41 PM

Magnus...this was beautiful!

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

10 posted 2002-02-12 08:46 PM

I’m listening, I’m listening….and what a pretty song I’m hearing. Lovely Magnus.

Give into the soft and echoing sighs
as love shines bright within the eyes.

How beautiful is that??

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-02-12 08:47 PM

Martie....thank you...happy that you enjoyed it....

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2002-02-12 08:48 PM

Tracey...thank you...that makes me feel very
good about this poem...thanx again..

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

13 posted 2002-02-12 08:52 PM

Stars that streak from the skies clear
in vision of night cold, dark and sheer
Kisses smothering lips with delight
as gleam of eyes brighten the night.
=========================================
Chaste not upon the moon hugging low
lest the night dwindle and romance go.
Give into the soft and echoing sighs
as love shines bright within the eyes.
=========================================

my this is lovely ... in its imagery, its cadence and poetic vocab & phrasing...and in its sensual passionate intend.
Love the title and that last verse is poetry in motion.
very very well done Poet sir

Some find subtlety in strangers,
some find subtlety in alone.
Your eyes, you see everything,
my eyes, I see it all together now ... and I know.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-02-12 08:55 PM

Oh gosh JM....thank you , thank you,
thank you....again and again and again....

Glad you liked this...

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

15 posted 2002-02-12 09:04 PM

Love, love, love...Love this one

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

16 posted 2002-02-12 09:09 PM

Walker...thanx so much...very pleased that
you did enjoy this little one..

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

17 posted 2002-02-12 09:22 PM

Hello Barry

I'm wondering how many times you'll let me use the word "stunning" to describe what I feel about your writing. Your words always send me to the most romantic of places.

Take care.......Sue

Suetang

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

18 posted 2002-02-12 09:26 PM

This literally begged to be read soft, low and slow...and caressed the inner soul so very well...

thank you for this lovely gift!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

19 posted 2002-02-12 09:31 PM

Gosh Sue...you ladies have almost got me
blushing tonite...I am very pleased that
this little romantic piece has touched you..

Thanx..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

20 posted 2002-02-12 09:32 PM

KJ....thank you...you know I have the highest
regard for your thoughts of my words...I
feel very good right now...thanx again..

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

21 posted 2002-02-13 12:53 PM

Goodness, I can feel this one and feel the mood you speak of lately. I love it!

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

22 posted 2002-02-13 05:09 PM

*sigh* sensually romantic...My kind of poem that makes me feel sooo good...Thanks, Magnus, I can always lose myself in your romantic visions...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

23 posted 2002-02-13 06:26 PM

Very romantic, Magnus!

Cor

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

24 posted 2002-02-13 06:32 PM

Give into the soft and echoing sighs
as love shines bright within the eyes""

WOW....I love how that feels, and the emotion it puts forth....lovely write Barry~

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-13-2002 06:32 PM).]

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