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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-12 03:06 PM

This is a brand new, never before seen Candy Heart Poem!!!

SWEET TALK
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/12/02

Sweet talk to me, darling
Whisper to my ear
All the lovely things
I’ve dreamed to hear

These terms of endearment
The ballet of poetic romance
Flows from your sugary lips
As we waltz in this slow dance

Your words are honeyed
You sing with classical beauty
Come, my love, my sweet queen
Sweet talk your love to me

I’ll sweet talk to you, my Guinevere
As doth the angels in matrimony
I’ll sweet talk until your heart melts with cheer
My sweet lovely lady…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-12-2002 03:07 PM).]
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-02-12 03:45 PM

Hi sweet Noah!  I just bought some of those candy hearts with the sayings on them, and finally realized what they are called....over here on the Canadian side anyway,...."Conversation Hearts."  
*Sorry it's been on my mind ever since you posted the first candy heart message poem a couple of weeks ago..lol*
This is a great one Noah and I am sure your lovely lady will enjoy it as much as I did.
~Hugs and a kiss on YOUR cheek, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~
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2 posted 2002-02-12 03:55 PM

I'll sweet talk to you, my Guinevere
As doth the angels in matrimony
I'll sweet talk until your heart melts with cheer
My sweet lovely lady
================================

I gotta get me some of these candies....
I dont remember them being so poetic...
back when I was reading them...they said things like  "cool dude"  rofl
Very clever and romantically lovely Noah...and? the best part is ya can eat the poem
Happy Valentines Day!!

Some find subtlety in strangers,
some find subtlety in alone.
Your eyes, you see everything,
my eyes, I see it all together now ... and I know.
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-02-13 10:57 AM

Now, that's a worthy goal

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
4 posted 2002-02-13 11:10 AM

Great writing, Noah.  Watch out for Guinivere, however.  She might be a kitty lover, and then you'll never know the joy of... well, you know...
sodpossom
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5 posted 2002-02-13 11:41 AM

Noah
A very sweet write my friend!
Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2002-02-13 11:58 AM

Dear Noah,
You're a romantic man. Sigh.

Nan
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7 posted 2002-02-13 12:00 PM

enjoyed
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8 posted 2002-02-13 12:12 PM

Sooooo very romantic Noah, beautiful words. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)
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