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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-02-12 01:01 PM




To enjoy this life that I have
so unlike that of the one before,
I look forward to the future
and to what it holds in store.

I know what it's like to live
and what it's like to dance,
I've experienced the passion
that comes only with true romance.

There is a light that shines in my heart
and a warmth from this love so true,
I've learned to enjoy life again
and it's all because of you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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Silver Streak
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1 posted 2002-02-12 01:03 PM


Beautiful!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Professor Gloom
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of Depression
2 posted 2002-02-12 01:12 PM


Nice poem, lovely sentiment,
Glad you learned to enjoy life,
May you continue to do so.

Gloom

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3 posted 2002-02-12 03:11 PM


This is pretty.

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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4 posted 2002-02-12 03:14 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your lovely heart shines with happiness and cheer, this is breathtaking! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-02-12 04:25 PM


Donna, this is sooo lovely.
Thank you for this one today.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

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6 posted 2002-02-12 07:45 PM


Donna, this would make a very lovely card
to someone you hold dear in your heart.

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2002-02-13 12:28 PM


"Because of you there's a song in my heart"
Wonderful write.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

strbbux
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8 posted 2002-02-13 12:31 PM


Gentle Spirit, this is so so sweet. much love in here. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Dulcinea
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9 posted 2002-02-13 02:58 PM


Ummmmmmmmm...I know that feeling...beautifully said!
RosePetal
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10 posted 2002-02-13 03:15 PM


this is bursting with love!
Happy Valentines Day to you and your guy!

Victoria
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11 posted 2002-02-13 04:00 PM


lovely words Donna and may you have a wonderful valentines day

                      ~Victoria~

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius


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In Your Poetic Mind
12 posted 2002-02-13 04:41 PM


Donna~

This is so beautiful, and so heart felt....have missed your words upon these pages.....


Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-13-2002 04:42 PM).]

Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2002-02-15 01:50 PM


Thanks to you all, and I miss you much.  and Lauren dear, you above all else know how much life is different for me now.  You are so appreciated....
Hugs to all.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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