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This Ache
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This Ache |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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This Ache the aching this wanting to be by your side I want it to go away wish it would subside for dreams that were once dreamed now are all dead and they are just echoes inside my head and I have to go on and dream up new dreams and my want of you makes my reality scream for this is not worth the tears that I cry for someone that couldn’t love and says goodbye "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (02-12-2002 12:45 PM).] |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
quote: Oh, I know this well. sky |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I know this ache..its torture, and you speak of it well, Lady. enjoyed. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sounds pretty final to me... |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
1slick_lady, isn't it true that our sweetest memories are often our biggest aches. You write about it eloquently. Thank you for sharing with us, dividing your pain. May our love with you be multiplied as we weep and love together.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is tormenting to be left aching in such a way, and the reality of knowing we can't force someone to return our love. Nice write~ I bet there are quite a few of us who can relate to this. |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Hello My Lady, I love the way you write...stylistically of course. Your short two to three words a line, which are very fluid and powerful. It's very refreshing. I am loving your reads. J~ |
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Johnnie Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 27Indiana |
this is so sad, so many people hurting. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This Ache..... Beautiful and OH God, How I can relate....... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a true outpouring here helen. . . it sticks out from the page, and makes us feel it right along with you. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
quote: So true, seems the ache isn't worth the pain. I hope your new dream will heal the hurt, and soothe the ache! Beautifully done! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - this is so sad from a soft heart... BC |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is sad, I wish you joy and peace. great expression. floriaFloria |
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