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Dance With The Brazen Moon
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Dance With The Brazen Moon |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
~~~~~A Light-Dancer, she sways and twirls in the moonlight. Twirling round and round until she falls to the ground breathless with her feverish stepping, her toe-to-toe twirling ballet.Her raven-colored hair spread out on the grass. While the Moon sends fingers of gold to caress her silken tresses. She lies silent...contempating the movement, the meaning in her dance with the brazen Moon. It is her heart that speaks rhythms, that sings love songs. He waits in the shadows, in the mist of her dreams. Worshipping the way she twirls, the way she steps.And, he exhales stars to radiate even more light for the Light-Dancer's dancing.She rises from the ground...refreshed in her resting, in her dreaming.He holds her in her dreams and speaks to her feet. Shadow and light twirling together, hand in hand with the brazen Moon. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautifully breathtaking, I could envision her and her lover dancing in the light of the moon, waltzing in heavens shadows! (kiss on cheek) You truly are a Poetess Of Lovely Visions! You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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heather_kitn Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 61In The Kokapelli's Song |
Vivid imagery leads to a flowing read that conveys every thought beautifully! -heather |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
What a dance! Whirl and flying across the floor. I see it all, the woman in repose, the man enraptured. I especially liked the lines 'It is her heart that speaks rhythms, that sings love songs' They speak, just as her heart does, of rhythm and dance. Excellent piece of writing! "A hard, cold wisom is required for goodness to accomplish good. Goodness without wisdom always accomplishes evil" - Robert Heinlein |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a magical dance this was! I really like the flow and rhythm of this, and the magical feeling of moonlight Love. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ivy Rose, You and moonlight...What a dance! Write on, dream on, dance on. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!A stunning vision that made me feel like dancing under the full moon. The whole vision of this poem is absolute perfection. I love the way it feels and looks. BRAVO!!!**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I love moonlight poems..loved it ivy rose, nicely done  ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivy Rose, Bravo for the dance and hatsoff  for the poem. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A light dancer, indeed...enjoyed the imagery, Ivy. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Ivy rose, I could just see her dancing. lovely floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Gorgeous imagery, Ivy.....I very much enjoyed your dance.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ivy, this is lovely, your words spun a picture in my mind. Kathleen-- |
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