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Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2002-02-12 07:47 AM

Am I a fool to want it all,
the love, the happiness, the laughter.
But life just seems a bouncing ball,
am I a fool to want it all.
When I fly high I'll take my fall
and lick my wounds right after.
Am I a fool to want it all,
the love, the happiness, the laughter

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

amigo
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

1 posted 2002-02-12 10:26 AM

You're no fool, I like to say
For, I have no plans to change my name
I pretty much feel the same way
You're no fool, I like to say
This is what we hope for every day
To play well in this tricky game
You're no fool, I like to say
For, I have no plans to change my name.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-02-12 10:33 AM

Not only are you NOT a fool, you deserve all the happiness you can get

I have missed your work

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-02-12 11:30 AM

Triolets, triolets everywhere. Great job on this, Titia. And I agree, you deserve every bit if it!

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

4 posted 2002-02-12 12:22 PM

You're no fool. This is what everyone wants.

sky

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2002-02-12 12:34 PM

am I a fool to want it all.
When I fly high I'll take my fall
and lick my wounds right after.
==================================

Now thats what I call a mothy motto

I'll trade you violets for your triolets,
and say kudos on a job well done,...I need to spend some time in that workshop, need to learn some new rhymes

Some find subtlety in strangers,
some find subtlety in alone.
Your eyes, you see everything,
my eyes, I see it all together now ... and I know.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-02-13 10:59 PM

I want it all too..do you know where I can get it?
Happy Valentines Day Titia

Sandra

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-02-13 11:02 PM

I think a fool would be the one that didn't want it all...James

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2002-02-14 12:41 PM

Titia you take each challenger and get the job done and this time was no exception. Loved the concept of your poem, well done my friend.

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes.
Let the reader catch their own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2002-02-14 12:46 PM

*sigh* I ask myself the very same questions...but I cannot give up my dreams...You are not fool...just keep wanting it...someday you will have it all as you well deserve...**big hugs**HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

10 posted 2002-02-14 06:15 PM

Never give up your dreams Titia, you deserve every one.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

11 posted 2002-02-14 08:07 PM

Amigo, WOW we could write duets

Interloper, thanks for missing me

Duncan, go write triolets, I'll see you in class sweet friend

Skyshine, thanks, go get it

Janet Marie, I'll trade violets with you anytime dear lady

Catalinamoon, I don't know I haven't found the store yet (LOL)

James Michael, you're so right

Sharon, I just keep trying

Startime, thanks I'll keep searching

Dee, thank you hope you'll find it too

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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