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Streen
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0 posted 2002-02-11 10:20 PM


           Touching nature departs
bird humming in the breeze
      shakings leaves vibrate air around
cracking beak enters by break
      bark creaking to the sodden roots
                               a breath of
sun milling about in clouds crowds
    wind breezing across tin roofs spread
bees floating into flowers rooted beside
     gurgling creak rushes through sediment    
                                God's sight
rustling wheat browns the fields; storms
     moistening hay rusts the gears
swiping fish of waterflies breaks
  threading spin of spider silk
                      into milieu
dragonflies soaring into oak's fingers
    buzzing past quirky chipmunks
beating wings glide shadows o'er
    children gleefully on their farm
                       of Thee.

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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2002-02-12 12:40 PM


This is beautiful, Streen.

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