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GOlDsparklESS
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0 posted 2002-02-11 10:03 PM


we live inside a bubble
saran wrapped
its stickiness surrounds us
our shallow society...
such is the glory of separation, "survival of the fittest..."

zen masters
echoing voices
fantastical journals a thousand times crossed
i sit still and i feel the oscillation
of eternity whispering
ten thousand hearts beating in rhythm
one song
no lyrics
all i can say now is
we'll see...

fortune quote
"The philosophy of one century is the common sense of the next."

i hope that inspires those of you who have the wisdom to understand.


© Copyright 2002 Manisha Narang - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-11 10:17 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is a beautifully esoteric write, sweet friend, this too is a poem that has me thinking and I too believe each new philosophy becomes something many of us accept in the futures to come and then as common sense is debated to find new reasons and ideas within! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet freind, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Manisha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-11 10:31 PM


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3 posted 2002-02-16 11:09 PM


i liked reading this and I have found it both skillfully done and powerfully inspiring. You have great wisdom!
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4 posted 2003-01-22 03:30 AM


uh....I love this~
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