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Lover Boy |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
LOVER BOY (A Candy Heart Poem) By: Noah Eaton 2/11/01 I am your lovely boy You hold a place deep inside of me Together in harmony we'll join I belong to your heart, glowing heavenly sweet Your sighs are like raindrops, waking my hearts flowers Angel hair waving in the wind blanketing my heart in silk Tapestry of words woven with emotions cotterpin, tied in the breath of a lover My heart melting, waterfalls in your eyes cascading like milk Your lips thrust out in jubilee, darts to the heart conducting thanksgivings concord I swallow the light of your laughter, blazing like the suns soft rays Your love revolves around my heart, you are my lover girl and so much more I always feel that harbinger of spring when I look at you, through every lovingly gaze Please let me be your lover boy You are my lover girl You fill me with infinite joy You light my heart, you light my world [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-11-2002 09:31 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah, this is so sweet dear Noah! What a wonderful way of creative writing you have. I enjoyed this one! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Noah.. THis was great buddy.. loved it.. ~~Jeff~~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Delightful poem, Noah. Thanks for sharing it.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
awwww!! you're poem was really beautiful. i appreciate sweet poems by even sweeter boys. thanks. love, manisha |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautifully sweet just like candy hearts. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Do you know what a perfect line you have ended this poem with? You light my heart, you light my world When we find someone who lights our world like this, we can do anything. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, this is all we really need in life, to have this kind of love for someone. Beautful. Happy Valentines Week. Sandra |
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