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Open Poetry #18

The Organic Verses

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2002-02-11 04:44 PM

Are our thoughts like seeds, the products of a fertile mind,
signifying needs expressed in verses like a vine?
Do they speak a language that the soul can understand?
Pondering their goals has placed a pencil in my hand.

Will they lead us to the brink of something quite profound,
or into some quagmire, sink, 'til we are all but drowned?
Where our best intentions meet resistance who can say?
( Better not to mention what I found there yesterday!)

From their complex roots they weave a pattern wrought of words,
leaving me to oft' believe there's naught that's more absurd.
Other times they speak as if did come straight from the heart,
dumb-struck, I can only stare and wonder at those parts

which grow along the lines of something, not quite yet astute,
wondering if mine perhaps mean I've become a fruit.

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-02-11 05:56 PM

I don't quite think that, Dr. Moose. Really liked those first two lines.

sky

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-02-11 07:39 PM

I would love to talk more with you about this!!!! I have talked to others about this, and I have much to ask you! Do you think there is a responsibility of putting words down? hmmm...feel free to e mail me, but I understand if you wish to keep that private too. Just a topic close to my heart.

Thank YOU.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

3 posted 2002-02-11 07:59 PM

Much enjoyed your thoughts here, Doc..very interesting!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-11 08:22 PM

YAY!!! Wonderful, sweet friend, I too believe that every thought is like a flower blooming, and spreading to create beds and petals of words that are bound to touch many! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet freind, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet William, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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