Open Poetry #18 |
Somewhere Out There |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Somewhere Out There today I found flowers on my car decorating my window to the road I wonder who had placed them there and how I deserved this gift bestowed seeing them just took away my breath as I stood there all alone no one else around gently I embraced them close to my heart but there was no card no name found I held them close all the same a little mystery a secret is fun to be somewhere out there in this world someone is thinking about and loves me "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awww what a mystery! beautiful flowers for you and no card to say who it's from! I love it |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Very nice twist on the usual Valentine love poem. I enjoyed the mystery of the unknown admirer. Cheryl |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Then very best kind of love! God knows! As He rewards you both. -newel Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a lovely surprise. How do you get guys to do that?? Happy Valentines.. Sandra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nice supriese and you wrote about it so very well! Nice work! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ain't it grand? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, a secret admirer, I love it, this is sooooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) May that special someone out there confess his love to you and may true love and joy forever fill your heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* You are very blessed to have an admirer...and a secret one makes life all the more exciting...Well done....Good for you..**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Great poem!!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - nice to see someone left flowers for you. I bet they compliment you. BC |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
way cool...... : ) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
wonderful thoughts, Dear Lady. I can just feel you hugging them to you and breathing in the thought of someone loving you. You need that. I love this poem. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Hello again My Lady, You are quickly becoming my new favorite poet on this site...everything you write is most assuredly superb. J~ |
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