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Through Her Eyes (Inspiration by JM)
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Through Her Eyes (Inspiration by JM) |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I’ve been with her…my best what others couldn’t see she treasures She has been…reflective. I’ve been with her…a fantasy beyond all expectation she believes She has been…rebirth. I’ve been with her…a poets love from word to deed she stands fast She has been…perfection. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I must say she inspired you alright! What a great poem to end my day Duncan, as this is indeed true perfection, and you have found it! The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow. This is beautiful…and it is so amazing to be able to take the dream and make it a reality. Who would have thought it huh? What a wonderful, and unexpected surprise to wake up to this morning. You’ve made me smile on a Monday morning…now that’s some feat!!!  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy you have found true love inside of her heart and I wish you eternal happiness and bliss! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are always a delight to read! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - you have been inspired. And it shows in this lovely poem... BC |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
it's great to see you being inspired! There is so much beauty to see through a lover's eyes! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Duncan, I do loveeeeeeeeeee your poems What a romantic lovely heart you have. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Duncan, your writing has become so incredibly romantic in the past while...surely it isn't just because of Valentine's Day!  This is wonderful and how nice for her to be able to wake up to this on a Monday morning. Gee, she wouldn't even need a Tim Horton's!  ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
You are so ready...  ...to be all that you can be. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
See how lovely is the view when you see your reflection in anothers eyes. Well I am loving this ... and while I am smiling at the credit you give me...me thinks(knows) it goes to your partner in rhyme She inspires wonderful things in your pen. Sometimes we get so down on ourselves that we lose sight of what we have to give... someone who loves us for who we are...someone who can see the parts of us we try to keep hidden, can offer us a view of what we can be once we are willing to love ourself as we so easily love others. And Tracy-girl...tis time for a new sig.... take mine if you like....seems appropriate under the poetic circumstance You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Mysteria Yep, she's perfect and she's got some really cool cars, too! Thanks much for reading. Trace Oh, great queen of understatement, yeah...who would have thought it? Not even DUI (and he thinks he knows everything)! Glad I made your Monday, darlin...you make my everyday! Noah Thanks, buddy. No one's happier than I am! Bill Absolutely...thanks for noticing! Joanna You're right, just hadn't stopped before to see it that way. Thank you! Tara And I love writing them. Thanks for thinking I'm romantic. Guess it's true a little, huh? Nancy Nope, not just because of Valentine's Day! This little red devil I met seems to have something to do with it, too! Thanks, Nancy. walker my friend, thank you...I think I am! And thank you for believing in my ability to be that and her's to see it...long before either of us did. Janet Marie The inspiration to see myself through her eyes was yours. Though, yes...she is my poetry and every bit of inspiration I ever dreamed of. It's funny, we've talked about her sig and the truth is that I love it. It's her. It's fun, playful and she knows a good toy when she's got one. So, I'm not too worried about the sig. Besides, if it hadn't been for that toy boy reference, I may never have written that first poem for her. Thank you, once again...for your thoughtful reply and the inspiration. |
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