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Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion

0 posted 2002-02-10 11:45 PM



How else can I say I need you
that in my breath, I feel you?
How else can I put my fears but simply
tossed out hope and smile just momentarily.
I am awash in missing you
drenched in the never of feeling you.
Would my lips kiss the flavor of your bliss
there would be no better wings lifting in kiss
than the ones I spread in welcome.
Please come back, my darling.
My ears miss the grip of your whisper.
My eyes miss the joy tears you bring
in the pause of breathlessness
after we have loved
and spent our passion beneath the night that covers us.
Dream with me
but dreams are not enough.
How else can I say I need you
that in my breath, I feel you
How else, my darling love, than this?

I am many.

© Copyright 2002 Siofra - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-02-10 11:51 PM


aww I hope he sees this and comes running back to you! Best wishes

RP

Saunni
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2 posted 2002-02-10 11:58 PM


Oh, what a great write and beautiful at that!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Startime
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3 posted 2002-02-10 11:59 PM


*sigh* how could he not come home when there is such love as this waiting for him...*sigh* I hope he hears and feels the love in this poem...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-02-11 08:14 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know that he will always be delighted to come running into your arms and loving you forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, you are soooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Siofra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sven
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5 posted 2002-02-11 10:16 AM


how else indeed??

well done Siofra. . . this one is very heartfelt. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Moonlight Romeo
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6 posted 2002-02-11 12:19 PM


There are stars that wait for us, and it will be soon that we shall see them again.

Thank you.  

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-02-12 12:21 PM


Enjoyed this...James
Janette
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8 posted 2002-02-13 01:03 AM


This just screams with passionate wants...very powerful write dear lady!
BluesSerenade
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9 posted 2002-02-13 01:25 AM


How else can I say I need you
that in my breath, I feel you!

I think you've pretty much said it all,
and so beautifully I might add.

dgvarner
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10 posted 2002-02-13 07:17 AM


hmm... a sad one here my friend..
but an ache well written...

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"it may be absurd..but dont be naive..even heros have the right to bleed" john ondrosic?

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Deep in the heart
11 posted 2002-02-13 01:32 PM


Have you called upon the little people for assistance?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion
12 posted 2002-02-14 01:30 AM


RosePetals,
I hope he does too.

Saunni,
Coming from you, that compliment is an honor.

Startime,
Thank you for your kind comments. He knows I love him.

Noah,
You're just so inspiring I don't know what to say. You shine, Dear..you really do. Thank you.

Sven,
Indeed it is. Thank you.

Moonlight Romeo,
Wonderful! The view alone is heartbreaking, Dear.   Your thoughts are always welcome.

Janette,
It is great to see you out in Open. Thank you for reading and enjoying.

BluesSerenade,
Thank you, and your comments are most beautiful too.

dgvarner,
Yes, sad and happy at the same time. Just missing someone.

Interloper,
Sir, I thought I was one of the little people...but then I could only turn to myself so much. I suppose I have not turned to the little people yet. Tell me, how might they assist me in this?   Thank you for taking your time with this. It is appreciated.

Ahh..James,
Your voice is so sweet and quiet that I missed you. Dear friend, I only know you through your responses to my poems and through your own work, but I like you a lot. Thank you for your kind words.




"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

[This message has been edited by Siofra (02-14-2002 01:33 AM).]

Dee
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13 posted 2002-02-14 06:36 PM


Siofra, such an ache, but what a way to tell him. Beautiful.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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