Open Poetry #18 |
Come Home Please |
Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
How else can I say I need you that in my breath, I feel you? How else can I put my fears but simply tossed out hope and smile just momentarily. I am awash in missing you drenched in the never of feeling you. Would my lips kiss the flavor of your bliss there would be no better wings lifting in kiss than the ones I spread in welcome. Please come back, my darling. My ears miss the grip of your whisper. My eyes miss the joy tears you bring in the pause of breathlessness after we have loved and spent our passion beneath the night that covers us. Dream with me but dreams are not enough. How else can I say I need you that in my breath, I feel you How else, my darling love, than this? I am many. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
aww I hope he sees this and comes running back to you! Best wishes RP |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, what a great write and beautiful at that! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how could he not come home when there is such love as this waiting for him...*sigh* I hope he hears and feels the love in this poem...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know that he will always be delighted to come running into your arms and loving you forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, you are soooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Siofra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
how else indeed?? well done Siofra. . . this one is very heartfelt. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
There are stars that wait for us, and it will be soon that we shall see them again. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this...James |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
This just screams with passionate wants...very powerful write dear lady! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
How else can I say I need you that in my breath, I feel you! I think you've pretty much said it all, and so beautifully I might add. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmm... a sad one here my friend.. but an ache well written... hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Have you called upon the little people for assistance? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
RosePetals, I hope he does too. Saunni, Coming from you, that compliment is an honor. Startime, Thank you for your kind comments. He knows I love him. Noah, You're just so inspiring I don't know what to say. You shine, Dear..you really do. Thank you. Sven, Indeed it is. Thank you. Moonlight Romeo, Wonderful! The view alone is heartbreaking, Dear. Your thoughts are always welcome. Janette, It is great to see you out in Open. Thank you for reading and enjoying. BluesSerenade, Thank you, and your comments are most beautiful too. dgvarner, Yes, sad and happy at the same time. Just missing someone. Interloper, Sir, I thought I was one of the little people...but then I could only turn to myself so much. I suppose I have not turned to the little people yet. Tell me, how might they assist me in this? Thank you for taking your time with this. It is appreciated. Ahh..James, Your voice is so sweet and quiet that I missed you. Dear friend, I only know you through your responses to my poems and through your own work, but I like you a lot. Thank you for your kind words. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet" [This message has been edited by Siofra (02-14-2002 01:33 AM).] |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Siofra, such an ache, but what a way to tell him. Beautiful. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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