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Alan
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0 posted 2002-02-10 10:10 PM


Dear Sweet Valentine,
     As I write this letter asking you to be mine.
Baring my soul for you and the world to see.
As my mind begins to have sobering thoughts
I find myself in a shell of a home lying on a bed of needles and pins
Not knowing where or how to begin
I realize that I am in the evening of my life
I shall uncover my dreams and hopes before you and God above
I need you to turn this empty home into a house full of love
As the sands of time are carried upon the wind
So are my hopes and dreams and
If you tell me your dreams I will make them mine
So that we will live out our dreams through love
So that I can truly begin…. To live
For from this moment on and through out eternity
To you, my heart I give

© alan/IcyHeart
02/10/02


© Copyright 2002 Alan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-10 10:15 PM




(smiles) Awwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet freind, your gorgeous declarations of love to your sweetheart echo in these beautiful words! (sigh) She is so very lucky, sweet friend, I just know she is going to love this forever, may true loves joy forever sing in your heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-10 10:51 PM


Alan, this made me sigh and smile....this is gentle...very gentle
Alan
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3 posted 2002-02-10 10:55 PM


Noah my friend...thank you

Sea... I am glad it drew a smile...

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4 posted 2002-02-10 11:00 PM


awww a most touching letter Alan!
Happy Valentines Day to you, I hope you receive a lot of love!

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