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Rhymed Release/Dusk To Dawn |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Rhymed Release~ "Go after him," she pleaded. "How can you just let him walk away?" "He was never mine to have," I replied. "So how can I expect him to stay?" Still she stared at me in disbelief. "But he was your reason to rhyme, you desired him and found your inspire in him, how can you give that up after all this time?" So I tried to make her understand -- some things can still be held on to, even while being let go. "I can set him free and still save a part for me, the memories keep the ache burning slow." Still she protested away in hope of sway ... "I know he would stay if you asked him to. I think you're making a mistake, one of these days, your heart's going to break ... then there will be no poetry left inside of you" I realized the true reason for her tears, I tried to calm her self doubt inspired fears. "My muse, my twin, my reflection in pen, I will always hold that part of him. He was our divine moment in time ... our taste of something fine. He'll always be our reason to rhyme -- our season of kind, and must I remind? We will always have the traces left behind." "But now we need to set him free, let him be all he needs be. Don't you see? It's our way to let him know ... the only way to show ... just how much he meant, to thank him for the time he spent." (the moments of content) She seemed to finally understand, then taking pen in hand. "He will always be our pen's fascination, our inspiration ... he'll always command our admiration" I smiled, recalling the anticipation. "Yes, my muse ... our aching temptation." So we lit a candle and coerced a verse, we set him free (and me) in rhymed reverse. Knowing he will always be our ink's immerse ... our pen's prized poetic curse. Oh this one ... we'll not soon forget, No this one ... we'll not ever regret. Janet Marie ~*~ ~*~ ~*~  ~Dusk To Dawn~ If my missing you could light the night ... my skies would glimmer in emerald glow. If my love for you could set the sun ... then eventide would be all we know. If my need for you could make it rain ... the clouds would never again be dry. If my devotion to you could pull the tides ... the oceans would rise and baptize the sky. If my ache for you could hang the moon ... there would be no need for morn to rise. If my wishes for you could blow out the stars ... then the moon would echo my lonely cries. You are my every dusk and dawn ... my night's ebony end ... my day's blue hued begin. Closing my eyes ... unto the skies, this wish I send ... I would give every new sunrise ... just to hold you once again. Janet Marie for DeVante' ... always my light.  You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Incredible.. is all I can and will say. |
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heather_kitn Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 61In The Kokapelli's Song |
Breath taking and deep and wonderful and magical and painful and lonely and hopeful and BEAUTIFULLY DONE!! No words, no critique, no compliment could do this justice! -heather I do not seek...I find! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh my! What an amazing write! I loved the conversation format..and the differing within the mirror of yourself. Wonderful to see inspire in your pen, my friend..where it always will be dipped in the heart's well. "You are my every dusk and dawn ... my night's ebony end ... my day's blue hued begin. Closing my eyes ... unto the skies, this wish I send ... I would give every new sunrise ... just to hold you once again." Your love for De Vante' is such an inspiration! A reflection of a bright star that many would give much to hold, even with the burn. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
OH MY! You do this soo well, Lady. I adore it! For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"If my ache for you could hang the moon ... there would be no need for morn to rise. If my wishes for you could blow out the stars ... then the moon would echo my lonely cries. You are my every dusk and dawn ... my night's ebony end ... my day's blue hued begin. Closing my eyes ... unto the skies, this wish I send ... I would give every new sunrise ... just to hold you once again."   YAY!!! Oooohhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love your gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) Your words are always so enchanting, sweet freind, I've missed them so much, may true love always fill your heart! We all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Janet, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You, my friend, are more on time than you know with this! (or maybe you DO know!  )and might I add? IT'S ABOUT TIME I SEE A POST FROM YOU!!!! I understand this so well. Reading this was as soothing as, well, talking with my wonderfully wise mother (don't analyze that) This is deliciously YOU. I am saving this, and I will e mail you later. Somehow this one hit me personally! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
KEEPER.... KEEPER KEEPER KEEPER!!! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
What can I say...? I LOVE it!!!!! It only takes ten minutes to make pidgeons stuffed with apricots. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Janet Marie, I am speechless and no words are going to even come close to what I am feeling at this moment...so I shall just say, Thank you...!! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I know what I want to say, but I dont know how to say it. I love the conversation part. wonderful write, floria Floria |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet, your golden butterfly wings are showing I am so glad to see a post from you! Beautiful!  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Could I send in my muze to be taught, Or just borrow yours for a while? I've always known what poet you were This verse made me forgot to smile. My lower jaw just sank down in Ahhhh, And I sat here gasping for air. Sweet Janet Marie you're a treat to us all, It had to be said because fair is fair. Thank you sweet lady Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I am jealous of the ghost and host And jealous of the very post And tearful that my butterfly Is grounded and she cannot fly. I grieve over the abyss of night And the loss of her golden light I am human to her tune and croon And human to her alters rune. And I cannot comfort her with time For I am near the end of rhyme But I bless you from a heart grown old And bless you with my Randy’s bold I cannot take DeVante’s place I offer you but souls of lace. To lay your head upon my breast And listen to my song of rest. My velvet glove is made of love On the wings of a gentle dove. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is sweetly beautiful and longing.  sky |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
JM...this is splendid...loved the part about the muse...I have one too....only mine, of course...is a she.... Muses are such wonderful parts of our poetry. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Janet, Once again you leave me speechless. You have such a talent. I'm in awe.. I love Dusk To Dawn.. it brought tears to my eyes. Just lovely. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour, I am now jealous of this lovely sweet reply *sigh* Janet is so lucky |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
If my need for you could make it rain ... the clouds would never again be dry. If my devotion to you could pull the tides ... the oceans would rise and baptize the sky. I know the aching need to make the skies rain and the tides move....this is undying in devotion, and such a butterfly moment....with love and peace to you....  Stunning Janet Marie.... Greeneyes~ Step through the |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ok...not gonna let the smiley monster eat this post LOL... Lucie ... thank you so much for such a wonderful reply...nice to see you back...Im sure Larry missed you *L* heather ... what a lovely thing to say...thank you so much for such an enthusiastic reply and welcome to Poetry Land, nice to meet you. *S* Martie ... thank you sweet poetess and hey? I think I even got the conversation punctuation right this time!! *wink*. Yeah, you know me..I'm always talking to that moody muse of mine. Thank you for your wonderful, sincere reply. LY *S* Jenn ... Thank you so much for the kind words girlie, and thanks for stopping by for a visit tonite *S* Noah ... well thank you for missing me, I miss me muse too in the long dry spells. *L* thanks too--for the "enchanting" reply, you are too kind poet sir *S* Sen me twin...yes...I KNOW and I also know letting go is a "moths" hardest to learn heart lesson. Ok I wont "analize"... but just remember...I warned you about me talkin in rhyme all the time. rofl thanks baby...smooches to you too lol LY Sunshine ... thank you ... thank you ...thank you ...thank you ... *L* now I'm "kept" moth *wink* LOL Skyfire ... you said all that you needed .. thank you very much, and so nice to meet you. *S* Nancy ... well then...you are welcome *S* and I'd like to thank you for thanking me LOL, thank you for the sweet reply girlie!! Floria ... thank you for the wonderful reply...I'm glad you enjoyed me talking to my self LOL .. thanks so much for coming by. *S* Sea ... is that golden or singed *wink* you know me "moth motto" well by now...but letting go is the one way to show them we learned from them and love them for them, and not what we need from them...I know you know.....thanks girlie...yeah its about time me muse came around. *S* Titia ... thank you dear, for that sweet verse...but you dont want my muse...shes always taking off. *L* ... thank you for such a kind reply. Glad to see your back from your break. *S* My Dearest Sy ... my "Stinkylove" ... Your words wrap me in versed velvet glove. Let me make this very clear ... Come closer so I can whisper in your ear. You do comfort me with your rhyme divine, To be your muse is time spent sublime. You need not haste or waste worry on jealousy, For you mean so very much to me. 'Tis not a matter of "replace," though laced with trace ... My heart still has more than enough space. Never doubt the depth of measure in which I treasure you, For all that you are and all that you do. You've made me the queen of your Camelot ... You make me believe I can be all that I am not. I'll hear no more told of a "heart grown old" In your heart of gold, I've come in from the cold. My poetry is where I sigh and cry, It may read sad and bring a tear to thy eye. But worry not for me ... my winkielove ... For I have known love that shines from so high above. As long as I warm my wings in that glorious light, As long as we keep trust in sight ... I know that we will be all right. Soon we will fly in tune to the moon and kiss with bliss the satin sky ... You see, I'm no longer afraid to try, for you turned this moth into a butterfly. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *WW* Skyshine... thank you and Hello!! Welcome to Poetry land ..so nice to meet you too. Magnus ... thank you kindly poet sir...yes...muses are what gives our pen wings... me and my moody muse are always going at it LOL, thank you for stopping by tonight *S* Tara... hey you!!....good to see you back...and I sincerely thank you so much for such kind praise of my work. I appreciate it. *S* SEA ... you're so right girlie...I am very lucky and he is indeed so sweet to me. Lauren... my sister in longing...I know that you know....and its quiet comfort for me knowing your always a whisper away...thank you my dear poetess. Thank you everyone, for these lovely replies.... my love and respect to poetry land. jm [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (02-11-2002 01:40 AM).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
As always Janet, your words reach far beyond the page, take care! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You have given such beautiful, thoughtful responses to my poetry and it is so rarely that I can respond to yours. Somehow, I want to make this special. I almost lost someone just a few days ago. Someone who may have then become my DeVante'. A love of a lifetime...lost. But somehow, someway, the gods shined on me and I was granted a dream I never deserved. I understand the letting go that you wrote of here. I wasn't prepared to do so...but I was resigned to the reality that would require it. But then, dreams really did come true. Thank you, Janet Marie for the unending love you still write of. It is most appreciated by this poet. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful writing Janet! I love the internal argument....it's impacts the mind of the reader. We all talk to ourselves constantly and this is a jewell of inner conversation. The inspiration catches on like wildfire!! Love this line.. "we set him free (and me) in rhymed reverse" You are a clever poetess and have a heart full of warm insight! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Eddie... thank you my friend...for allowing my words to reach you. Love your signature you take care too dear poet sir Duncan...*shaking my head and smiling at you* ... trust me ... you DID "make it special" ... and I thank you for this, for I truly felt the sincerety of your words, and the kindness of your intend. He was a once in a lifetime love...and one of the most important things I learned from him is.. we ALL deserve to be loved like this. You are included in that. See yourself thru her eyes...and you will understand and be able to accept that part of you. I am so happy that you got your wish, and a second chance. Your poetry to each other has touched me. Best wishes to you both. Thank you very much for this reply Duncan...I was just about to sign off when it came up... so now I will retire with a smile on my face. E-babes...you snuck in on me....thank you my poet pal...Im so glad to see you here...I have missed your wonderful replies. Thank you for the high praise...coming from you, it means so much [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (02-11-2002 01:37 AM).] |
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Daemonyin Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 31 |
Reading this, I feel alive... I relate to these beautiful words you wrote... If only I could relay them as you do... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Art by William Whitaker [This message has been edited by Mysteria (02-11-2002 02:10 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Told you it was a Keeper, and yes, little Moth...you ARE kept! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic writing Janet...this is touching me beyond belief...James |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so beautiful JM. He certainly does inspire your pen to soar, along with your heart. I understand the loss of a true love, for I once thought too, that no one could take his place. But, I have discovered that I can love again with that same depth…and I think you will too sweet poetess. Btw, sy’s response, and yours to him, nearly brought a tear to my eye. What wonderful inspiration you both are to each other…I love reading both of your words on these pages. They always bring a smile to this reader. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Still she protested away in hope of sway ... "I know he would stay if you asked him to." "He'll always be our reason to rhyme -- our season of kind, and must I remind? We will always have the traces left behind."" "So we lit a candle and coerced a verse, we set him free (and me) in rhymed reverse. Knowing he will always be our ink's immerse ... our pen's prized poetic curse." "If my need for you could make it rain ... the clouds would never again be dry. If my devotion to you could pull the tides ... the oceans would rise and baptize the sky." I always ready myself for incredible depth and emotion when I click on a post from you Janet Marie. These are just wonderful! I loved the conversational aspects of the first post ... it flowed so beautifully ... and the internal rhymes gator gal ... excellent, excellent! The imagery and descriptive qualities in the second piece were breathtaking ... I loved the "baptize the sky" phrase. Just lovely JM ... just lovely! Best wishes and big hugs, /Kit PS ... here's a new smilie to always remind us that there is light at the end of every tunnel ...  |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Janet, I don't see your poems enough, but when I do, you make sure they are beauties, don't you. You have really touched me with these. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Daemonyin .... thank you so much ... that is a wonderful compliment, that my words reach you in that way. thank you for sharing that with me...good too see you here again. *S* Sharon....that is SO COOL!!! how do you do that? THANK YOU for that gorgeous and perfect picture. I'll be printing and framing that...thank you very much dear poetess. ( no crying) butterflies dont cry, *smile* Sun ... my dear...I never doubted YOU for a minute...*S* and...I'm quite sure I am in good company. *winkie* LOL TY!!!!!! SBJ ... thank you my friend...for allowing my words to reach you in that way. Isnt that the best part of these blue pages!! TY *S* Tracy ... thank you girlie...and I am so glad to hear your heart is open and discovering it has no boundaries!! and yes...my sweet Sy inspires me every day...hes soooo cooool *wink* ... and ya know what...me thinks its time for you to find a new signature...LOL!! TY Kit .... ahhhh my dear gator-girlie...what would we ever do with out your lovely responses Thank you sweetie for such a heartwarming reply...and for that GROOVY Smilie....ya know I was thinking how appropriate it is that YOU would be Ron's Queen of Icons...who better to be in charge of smilies than our "smile waiting to happen" Kit-girlie thank you dear!!Dee ... you replies always touch me....and I thank you for always "finding" me and being such a faithful reader...and CONGRATS ON THAT NEW GRANDBABY!!! How wonderful!!!  thank you all for these wonderful warm replies.... you would think my muse would come around more than once a month to be touched by all of your kind words LOL .. thank you...truely. [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (02-11-2002 09:08 AM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I took out the crying smilie, you are so right, to see these words from you are truly something to celebrate as you celebrate him. Oh, and the reason the muse only comes one a month or so is it "knows" we wait, and anything worth having is worth waiting for I did that in Paintshop JM. The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
very touching JM...thank you for posting this!!! |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Janet Marie, I never knew a "moth" could be so beautiful. I think it is time for you to look into the mirror and see the butterfly you truely are. Thanks for sharing your lovely words with us once again. Sad but comforting, ME |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
"If my ache for you could hang the moon ... there would be no need for morn to rise. If my wishes for you could blow out the stars ... then the moon would echo my lonely cries." oooooo that IS poetry. i love that. but the first one... "Rhymed Release" that is quite possibly my favorite i've read from you to date. the internal rhymes and the rhythm is brilliant! but the message is by far...oh my... how can i find the right words to encapsulate your wisdom... letting someone go to be what they must is the kind of love we should all be able to experienec once in our lives. it's hard to see how letting go defines a boundless love....but you are not only caring, but wise in doing so. two and 1/2 years ago i would have understood, but probably not agreed. it is hard to learn that people change. these words prove it. wonderful, as always, my inspiration. i dig it!!!! "There he goes. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I reserve a prayer for you, that someday you'll ease your toes in the sifting sands of a worthy beach and view a sunrise o'er an ample sea. Enjoyed your poignant pen. "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
I LOVED THIS!!! WOW.... wonderful.. ~~Jeff~~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sharon ... thank you for that lovely thought, and I hope I can always live up to that... thank you again for that wonderful pic and taking the time to do that for me. Rose Petal...and thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. I appreciate you coming by. M.E. ... what a very sweet thing to say...thank you so much for your kind words...and its good to see you back!! Ethan-baby...you are too cool and too good to me and I love ya for it LOL So ya like when I talk to myself like a crazy woman in rhymes huh? thank you my groovy-guy...so good to see your name here...you dont come round enough...but you light up the page when you do TY!!! Richard....I share that prayer with you...thank you for your kindess and its good to find your name here today. Thank you for you touching reply. If I ever get there... I'll send ya pics..thats a promise Jeff ... thank you for the jubilant reply...glad you enjoyed!! thank you all for your kind words |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'So I tried to make her understand -- some things can still be held on to, even while being let go. "I can set him free and still save a part for me, the memories keep the ache burning slow." ' ============================ 'If my ache for you could hang the moon ... there would be no need for morn to rise. If my wishes for you could blow out the stars ... then the moon would echo my lonely cries.' Amazing and breathtaking as always, J...always great to read your flawless rhyme and cadence...and the emotion throughout--well, that just speaks for itself...your writing always does the feeling true justice...fantastic, J! sp   And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... [This message has been edited by snowpants (02-12-2002 08:40 PM).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Ahhhhh Janet, a wonderful read. Really enjoyed. Sorry took so long to reply, me and my memory...lol So if I met you and your muse at the arch would that be a threesome.... Parker |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Kris...thank ya so much girlie...thanx for the edit and critique view on me rhymes too P-man...what are we gonna have to put in that juicer for that memory of yours... Im afraid not even raspberry tea would work on you  A threesome huh? Think ya can remember where the Arch is? Tell ya what, bring your muse and we'll make it for four...Square dancing OF COURSE!!!what did you think I meant??? Thanks for stoping by better late than never-gator *L* thanks again to all for the kind replies to this and for your support of my work. I do apprecitate it so much. peace and poetry jm "Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*trying to get this to show in library* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Yeah sure, you just wanted to bump yourself! Read, again...figured, I'd respond, again. Thanks...again. lol |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I suppose nothing more can be added that hasn't been said already. A very beautiful poem that I know came straight from the heart. Couldn't help but ~~sigh~~ all the way through. Best to you, and thank you for sharing it! [This message has been edited by Dulcinea (02-18-2002 01:44 PM).] |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Truly exquisite ~ breathtaking ~ beautiful. May I keep a copy? There is someone I need to show it to, in case tomorrow never comes. Thank you for writing and posting this. ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Duncan .... LOL....ummmmm me thinks it twas you that bumped me ... and me thanks you for coming by again...that's always a wonderful compliment. and? its STILL not showing in me library LOLDulcinea... thank you so much for such a lovely reply, your words added were just right Thank you for reading. ice queen...yes, I would be honored, that is always a wonderful compliment that you want to share this with someone. That's what poetry is meant to be. Thank you very much. thanks to all who replied my respect to poetry land jm |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You knew I would be here today didn't you... Yeppers...needing a comforting touch today and just where I thought I could...right here within your words sweetie...Devante's words through you...they always shine brightest when our hearts need his light the most. Love you girlie and love the way you weave with him in your pen...and in your soul as always...as was meant to be~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
For a relatively prompt person, I can sure drag in late, can't I? *S* But even if I'd read this immediately, I'd still be at a loss for words that would do it justice. Dusk to Dawn had impressed me so much... I'm glad you decided to post it.*S* And you paired it perfectly with Rhymed Release... the varying styles show the depth of your talent as clearly as the words show your heart. Absolutely wonderful. *S* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Holly ... it means so much to me that you came here on this day, and found some comfort, love you too girlie. thank you for sharing the Butterfly poem Ruth ... you can "drag" in whenever you can make it... your kind and sincerewords of insight are always welcome...Its always good to see your name here... lets us know the werk monster didnt eat you *L* thank you very much for this sweet reply Ruthie-girl. thank you all, peace and poety jm |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jan... i thought hearing from you a few days ago was a real treat...but that was nothing compared to being able to see your lovely words of rhyme again. this was so touching and beautiful dear friend of mine. i have missed your work terribly and am so glad i got the chance to once again be in awe of your amazing talent. god bless you. i love ya. take care. amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Amy-girl....I see you been digging in back pages...LOL... thank you girlie...and its good to see your name in here...its been too long, but life takes us where we need to be right? Hope all is well with you and your settled in with the move and new job. you take care too  "Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power. |
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