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Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion

0 posted 2002-02-10 12:01 PM



For wanting you all to myself
there are no ready made cures
I ridicule my difficulties
in following all the rules.
The rules are that I have to share
your time within another snared.

What else is there to say?


I am many.

[This message has been edited by Siofra (02-10-2002 12:02 AM).]

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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2002-02-10 12:36 PM


Only you know what you can live with
and without!  
Either way it's a tough call!

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-02-10 12:43 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yes, only you can decide, and may your heart forever be filled with happiness! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Siofra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sven
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3 posted 2002-02-10 07:47 PM


I'm sure that there is more. . . but, this says a lot. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
4 posted 2002-02-10 07:50 PM


May you find peace in whatever path you take.  This one hurts, but I recognize the place.
Silver Streak
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5 posted 2002-02-10 07:58 PM


Just say, "I love you". It's true, isn't it?

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-02-11 01:37 PM


my love is selfish
sharing you is difficult
how I love you so

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Tiersdin
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east coast
7 posted 2002-02-11 01:39 PM


Powerful!

enjoyed!

~Tier

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2002-02-11 01:40 PM


This is very well done and I love these short rhymes.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

RosePetal
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9 posted 2002-02-11 01:43 PM


I enjoyed this so much! Short and expressive.
Good job

Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you
10 posted 2002-02-11 02:43 PM


You have said it all.  And you are missed as well.

Thank you

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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