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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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i didnt want to be alone tonite i didnt want to hear the silence my body hungering for embrace my neck longing for your face against it my mouth thirsty for your lips your breath, your slow and passionate kiss your hunger, your urgency... i closed my eyes and found that even dreams no longer console me i am still alone... hold me--come quickly to hold me... my body shivers with the thought of you my aloneness has become too vast my need has become too long unfulfilled... i didnt want to be alone ...ever -dgvarner 2-9-02 ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yearning and love fills your golden words! (sigh) May you forever be embraced with true love and be alone never again! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
The longing flows from our pen. Well done g, take care! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
dg, I find that it comes and goes in waves or sometimes slowly like the tide. All that energy going to waste. Aw shucks, I am way over here and you are way over there! (Yes, I still lurk around this place once in awhile, groping for my wandering muse.) e "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
even the net sometimes doesn't help this loneliness. contact is the only solution. I'm ready for some contact sweets.  Parker |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is sad when we are no longer consoled by our dreams. It's a lonely place to be when love is lost. Enjoyed your poem dg~ |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
awwww.....written powerfully and emotionally, just like they exude from a soulful cry, DG... I DOOO hope you find solutions to your askance of: ever what a lovely writer you are! theShadowRider |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Wonderfully wonderful and even in perfect thought with the way I've felt for many nights. I love this, Lady. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This ever needs to go back to the top for another read. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thank you NOAH.. EDDIE..lot of that stuff packed in my pen..lol thanks my friend.. KRAW..glad youre still lurking! i've noticed it sort of comes and goes too..more noticeable lately tho... thanks friend..PARKER..the cause of all my problems... yes..contact will be good...BLUES..love being lost...and love being wrapped around the soul, unable to be reached tangibly...dreams are nearly used up...thanks for your reply SHADOWRIDER..(i like your chosen name..) thank you much for such a nice reply! TEMPRESS..thank you, glad you enjoyed! PARKER..nice try anyway glad youre still reading...hugs, g |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
I just thought you'd like to know that I used the greeting card feature and sent this to someone I care for deeply. It was perfect for saying what I needed to say to them. Loved this! I am many. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW! I loved this! Write on! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
SIOFRA..wow..i feel honored that you have seen fit to use this as a greeting card thank you much for reading!INTERLOPER..many thank my poet friend! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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