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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2002-02-09 02:08 PM


White lace
of winter snow
adorns bramble and bush
she is awaiting her bridegroom
Spring vows

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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1 posted 2002-02-09 02:12 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...here comes the bride now, this is sooooooo lovely! (kiss on cheek) Your gorgeous words of nature and love always make me smile, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you are an angel! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-09 02:21 PM


There is nothing quite like a beautiful bride walking down the isle! That is a moment in my future that I long for!
Very Nice

deleeme
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3 posted 2002-02-09 09:46 PM


Dear Ellie,
As the anticipation of the Wedded Nuptuals and Bless- so is The Bride of Winter in Her full attire, Looking for the coming of her handsome groom, Spring!  You have written a lovely Cinquain! I'll be looking forward to the Weding too!


  David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

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