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DayDreamer99
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since 2002-01-23
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0 posted 2002-02-09 09:11 AM


Just when i thought
I could live without you
You come back into my life
Once again,its always what you do

Couldnt you have just kept away?
You know i hated it...but it was best
I wouldnt have to put up with your lies
And could give my broken heart a rest

Yet last night...you walked back in
And i forgot everything you had done
It was good for awhile, felt like normal
But afterwards who would be the one having fun?

I know its not me,you told me you loved her
Why? What is it about her?i didnt know what to say
I wanted to say "why her?am i ever going to be good enough for you?"
But i didnt, i had to leave i couldnt talk anymore that day

My friends say "why do you still love him?"
And i say back "he's all ive ever known of"
They say i deserve better than him
But after everything hes still the one i love

                                                     by:Tiffany

*its one of the longest poems i have ever wrote*


[This message has been edited by DayDreamer99 (02-10-2002 02:09 PM).]

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akela
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since 2002-02-05
Posts 15
croydon england
1 posted 2002-02-09 09:55 AM


the heart is a wierd thing i totally identified with this one my friend has just had an almost identical situation yet as much as hes hurt her shes still not able to move on the feelings for him no matter how misguided will take a long time to put aside lets hope you can move on sooner than later
good luck

live life to the max forfill your dreams

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-02-09 10:01 AM


Love rules, nice write Tiffany. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

DayDreamer99
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since 2002-01-23
Posts 72

3 posted 2002-02-09 10:04 AM


love rules...i suppose ....depending on what what you've known of...all i have knwon is this kind of trapped kind so...
Tifferz

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-02-09 10:22 AM


Tiffany,
Since we are all different there is no answer to you question. Enjoyed

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