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rosepetals25

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0 posted 2002-02-08 08:57 PM

Your Love

Your love makes me strong
Gives me courage to stand up
And face all my fears
Your love shelters and protects
Forcing me to move forward

Your love helps me to
Slay the dark demons that hide
In the deep corners
Of this tattered, timid soul
Finally setting me free

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (02-08-2002 09:04 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-08 09:00 PM

(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I wish this love to forever shine in you and forever fill your heart with joy and strength! (kiss on cheek) I'm so happy for you, sweey friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-02-08 09:01 PM

rosepetals25 - you write about this love well. And the writing is read with feelings taken...

BC

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

3 posted 2002-02-08 09:03 PM

rosepetals25, this is a fabulous double tanka. It glows brightly from the love in your heart. Thank you for sharing.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2002-02-08 09:06 PM

I LOVE it when you write like this ....

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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5 posted 2002-02-08 09:06 PM

Noah - Thank you for stopping

I'm glad you liked.

Bill - Thank you.. I'm trying to write something a little more happier... after all.. Valentine's Day is coming.. and I have a reason to be happy this year

Silver - I'm happy you enjoyed it

Thanks for stopping in.

Susan -

You snuck in on me !!! I'm glad you liked it

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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-02-08 10:12 PM

*sigh* that is what love is about...it is being strong when the other is weak and sharing our strength with each other....*sigh* I love this poem...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2002-02-08 10:37 PM

Tara,

Isn't it amazing how love can transform us and take to places we never thought possible? You've done well with this and I love what you're saying here, my friend. (((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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