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Romeo
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0 posted 2002-02-08 09:45 AM









     

Tonight, she'll come to heal my pains

Tonight, she'll untie my earthly chains


hours and hours I spent

waiting for her heavenly descent


How can I descibe your lovely face?

most beautiful than a shining star in space


Both themind and the pen are weak

no words or poets can reach her peak


No body saw her charmed beauty

but it's me who can value her pretty

     

every night, I dream of her smile

her eyes,lips, and legendary tale
I feel your soul from far

flying behind horizons where you are

     

melting withen my smallest cells

acting in harmony like chuches bells

     
I woke up collecting my shattered thought

looking at your marvelous light
strange that I couldn't move
frozen in the deepest hove

She graped my icedhand

and led me to her magical land


     


ROMEO





[This message has been edited by Romeo (02-08-2002 09:51 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-08 09:51 AM


"I woke up collecting my shattered thought"

that line is so great! It stood out for me....

Romeo
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2 posted 2002-02-08 09:55 AM


SEA

Hi there.........it's been a real honor to have u here in Romeo's

thanks alot 4 ur sweet words.....

I'm glad that u loved that line.....


with all my best regards

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