Open Poetry #18 |
Blue Shawl Dancer |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
She held the precious blue shawl in her gnarled hands feeling its softness, seeing the intricate beauty of its design, its sky blue color with the white fringe. And, she thought of a time when she was followed after, when the blue shawl captured her beauty, captured the hearts of many brave warriors.Great, great, grandmother had worn it many summers before.Then, she had worn it with joy; for it represented all of the ancient ways, the sacred songs. She as a promise wrapped in the blue shawl of love, dancing to the pulse ~~~~~~~~~~of its drums. But today, she gently removed the blue shawl from its wrappings and placed it across her weathered shoulders. The Great Spirit was calling to her soul.She would soon shawl dance before Him. And the blue shawl would tell Him of the many moons ~~~~~~~~~~of her beauty. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is excellent imagery here. I could see everything as if it were right in front of me. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I've missed you and your beautiful words soooooo much! (kiss on cheek) Your words always shine with the moon, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is sooooooo spiritually wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-07-2002 08:59 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful story with great imagery! Enjoyed the read this evening. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
We all hold something dear, handed down through the generations, a reflection of who and what we are, weather it be tangible, or simply a captive ideal.....like the blue shawl.....beautiful and vivid post dear friend!!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ivy..you write these ancient poems of lore amongst our native americans so well...Makes me feel like I should be wearing a headress. And be stomping around a fire, chanting... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was absolutely spellbinding and held me to the end, and you wrote of the shawl dance perfectly. I thoroughly enjoyed this. The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ivy Rose, I can see the blue shawl dancer with the great sky spirit even as I read this. Excellent work Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - love your images of the blue shawl dancer. And the story of this poem... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lovely Ivy. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful work, great imagery, thank you for sharing. Regards, Olias. I dont care I'll just dream and stay tanned, toss up my heart and see where it lands. S. Bishop. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Ivy, This is beautiful. I can see it in front of me clearly. You have a lot of talent. Nan |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* absolutely stunning...you paint the most incredible visions and fill them with heart and life...Magnificent. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Ivy Rose, this gave me goose bumps, good one. oh so nice. floria Floria |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I read this yesterday, but didn't get a chance to reply... and thought of it again last night as I watched the native dancers participating in the opening ceremonies of the Olympic games. *S* This is magnificent... one for remembering and revisiting over and over. *S* Into my library! *S* |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Stunning piece!! Am spell-bound! |
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