Open Poetry #18 |
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Castle Of Glass |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859![]() |
This poem had a difficult birth, LOL, I think it was breach.. ![]() Castle Of Glass She gazes through her walls of polished glass, Her eyes on distant lands so lush and sweet. She tries to hide the yearnings but alas. With crystal, castle walls can't be discreet. Her longing Knight peers through her lucid walls. His ardent love for her he cannot hide. It matters not, his longing or his calls. For she will never love him as his bride. And thus, he trusted her with all his might. With another's heart she was now smitten. While he in torment hoped she would transform. She remained cold, as the letter she had written. Shattered and in tears, his soul now exposed. For with all his being, he loved her from the start. The door to her heart, for him she had closed. Determined forever, they would be apart. Alone in isolation, in her transparent castle. She remains open, for all the world to see. And waits still for her mysterious Knight . To rescue and cherish her, setting her free. Floria |
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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169 |
A clever poem, this had me for the entire ride. Thank you. ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such yearning fills these gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) May he find her and rescue her and may they live happily ever after always! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very romantic, Floria ![]() Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
strbbux - each verse of this write flowed me right through to the ending. Very nice write... BC |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Beautiful! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
And what a vision these glass walls shared with us.....wonderful poem dear friend!!! |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Floria darling girl I suppose you think that I’m going to praise you to the skies? Hmmm? …….. Well, of course I am, this is utterly utterly wonderful as YOU very well know. So much shown here, how no matter how much we want someone to love us if they don’t we can’t make them. Also shows that some people simply are blind no matter how clear a thing is to see. Wonderful analogy darling girl truly outstanding writing ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Floria, this may have had a difficult birth but it is living a wonderful life now! This is a beautiful write..I just love it! The flow and words..the story...just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed this tonight. Email it to your hubby downstairs, and I will mine too. LOL...Hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh Floria...you know how I do love Knights and maidens.....you suckered me right into this one....Excellent...wasn't a breach birth... |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That'll be how I end up if I'm not careful. Why does love have to be so tough? ![]() sky |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I am a big fan of castle stories, and this one is wonderful. Much enjoyed Sandra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is extremely beautiful and romantic, Floria. It seems as if this would be a good home for the Ice Princess ![]() and people who live in glass castles shouldn't throw stones. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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