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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-07 04:33 PM

Let’s Dance

for so long you have
been locked away
sitting in silence
in your house of gray
only wishing to the moon
and then there was me
I stir your passions
I have your key
you were dark
I am your light
two shadows that dance
in dreams at night
liquid elixir
is my very spell
you can not resist
I compel
I flow through your day
in sweet surprise
that tickle on your neck
as hairs rise
the tender touch
of a snowflakes kiss
the other you
that you have missed
let us not again
miss this chance
I hold out my hand
let’s dance

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (02-07-2002 08:23 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-07 05:08 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beautifully compassionate, sweet friend, your loving heart reaches out to your love with cheer and the promise of true joy and trust forever! (kiss on cheek) Your words always make me smile, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-02-07 05:11 PM

helen - lovely write, only you can write like this. I love to dance, to the blues...

BC

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

3 posted 2002-02-07 11:44 PM

I like the demonstration of insight you show for this person. To extend a hand sometimes is all it takes to heal a soul. Beatiful sentiment.

Kat

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2002-02-08 01:53 AM

: )

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2002-02-08 06:43 AM

1slick_lady,
what a glorius invitation.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-02-08 10:45 AM

my friend,let's dance

enjoyed

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2002-02-08 10:49 AM

WOW!!!How could he possibly resist an invitation like this one...I am sure you will get the answer you want. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (02-08-2002 12:29 PM).]

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2002-02-08 12:25 PM

This is an excellent write!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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