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0 posted 2002-02-07 03:03 PM



skating in the rink
won't over-exert myself
sport should be leisure


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1 posted 2002-02-07 03:08 PM




BRAVO!!! I don't know if I caught the pun or not, but I believe that life should never be treated seriously all the time as a game, and we should treat every opportunity leisurely and realize how special we are! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is marvelous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-07 03:13 PM


Noah,

Sorry, do you mean that life should not be treated seriously as a game all the time?? I am a bit confused here.There was no pun intended but if you're saying life shouldn't be taken seriously, that's true to me


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3 posted 2002-02-08 08:09 PM


Olympic leisure
Sporting Parade of Nations
Lifetime exertion

ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-02-08 08:13 PM


You have said so much in such few words, there is such a commitment involved and when if athlete burns out what a pity!


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5 posted 2002-02-08 08:37 PM


This reminds me the olympics are on ha...but seriously.. i broke my arm the last time i skated..when i was 17 ha..roller skating in a rink..

             ~Vic

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6 posted 2002-02-08 10:07 PM


good timing for this winter olympic sport round Vic!


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