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In the Morning's Mist
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In the Morning's Mist |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In the Morning's Mist Thinking about you, observing the mornings mist, my thoughts tangle with the touch of yesterday. You have keyed into my heart removing the distant heartache momentarily, allowing me a sense of comfort. You have distracted me from my doubts, silenced my cries of pain. My mind in constant wonder, if ever there would be a second chance for me. As darkness fell, the rain brought the storm of fear raging within me. Last night, you eased me into the promise that there are rainbows ahead, to brighten the way. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the thoughts and emotions here are felt  I love this |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
STANDING OVATION!!!! Yes...yes yes...this is what it is all about...*sigh* he is a lucky man and I am sure he has the strength and love to keep your fears at bay and to chase them away once and for all....BRAVO!!!Embrace this second chance with all your heart and soul...*giggling* I so love to see people falling in love. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is lovely, Maureen. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You have distracted me from my doubts, I like that thought~ We could all use a little distraction now and then. Staying focused is not always in our best interest. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - your writing is of grace and wondernment from that soft heart. This is you, as always... BC |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This plays right into my heart, Maureen... Its so beautifully written and so very full of soul and of life.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Last night, you eased me into the promise that there are rainbows ahead, to brighten the way. It's in the air and this captures the moment beautifully! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is wonderful!!! BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!! Oh Maureen, I hope you have found true love, you deserve the greatest happiness and I would be so delighted to hear of your joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a true angel to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Beautiful, so beautiful. I really love it. Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i hope you see a rainbow right now.. waiting patiently ha..   ~Victoria |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine and Moonlight are GR8! Love your work, as usual Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
NT: you write such thoughtful feelings. I really like how you wait for the 'second chance'. If deserved, I think we come back a little wiser a second time. Compelling lines! PB4S |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very very nice nakd, love it, floriaFloria |
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