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Little_White_Flowers
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0 posted 2002-02-06 11:09 PM



To late to turn back

To late to apologize

To late to take it all back

To late to think about it before doing it

To late to realize it was a bad choice

To late to say no

Why didn’t I just turn away?

Why should it matter?

Why should anybody care?

Why didn’t I just think?

Why didn’t I just be smart for once?

Why didn’t I say no?

To late to wonder why

To late to see it was no good to lie

To late to see that people care

To late to think

To late to be smart

To late to realize I should of said no

I didn’t stop to think if anybody would care

I didn’t stop to think if it would matter

I did not stop to think at all

I did not stop to see what I was doing

I did not stop to say no

I didn’t, I shouldn’t, why did I, all dosent

Mater now all I know is that scince I didn’t

Do the right thing, since I shouldn’t have done

It in the first place why didt I say no?

[This message has been edited by Little_White_Flowers (02-06-2002 11:13 PM).]

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-02-06 11:12 PM




WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is a powerful, wonderful first post, sweet friend, I love it, I believe we all have times we feel this way, but all we can do is accept it and move on, learning for ourselves and watching our hearts grow with love! BRAVO!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-07 12:46 PM


Wonderful poem my dear. Words of truth spoken so bluntly...Nice

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~
"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

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3 posted 2002-02-07 12:51 PM


LittleWhiteFlowers~
Welcome to Passions~
You'll enjoy the poetry and friendships here~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2002-02-07 04:33 AM


Welcome to Passions

  Your first posting shows a great deal of emotion and full of a lot of questions I am sure many have asked themselves more than once.  I know you will enjoy writing here, you are in good company.

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes.  Let the reader
catch his own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~


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5 posted 2002-02-07 06:54 AM



Good questions, and if a lesson has been learned, then it is never too late! Welcome to Passions!  Check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


RosePetal
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6 posted 2002-02-07 11:55 AM


Welcome to poetry land!!! These are the same questions I ask myself when I make a mistake!
Thankfully, we can learn from our mistakes.
nice poem

RP

Startime
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7 posted 2002-02-07 11:59 AM


*sigh* it's never to late to say you are sorry and this poem shows the deep regret you feel...Magnificent writing. Welcome to Passions...You write from your heart and I love that...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

BluesSerenade
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8 posted 2002-02-07 12:10 PM


We get the biggest reaction from ourselves
when acting on impulse. Been there done that!  
*welcome*

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9 posted 2002-02-07 01:49 PM


Welcome, Little White Flowers! Never wait until it's too late to reach out and say the words that need to be spoken. Too many regrets bring on too many wrinkles.
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