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icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

0 posted 2002-02-06 08:21 PM

You come and go
in and out of my life
like so many rainy days
I am the last raindrop
forgotten as soon
as the sun appears
You have filled your jars
with a million other downpours
It is of no consequence
to you
that I am lost
for you believe
that I will rain again
When your vessels are empty
and thirst keeps you weak
dream of me
As I am wept
from sky to ground
water morphs to crystal
and shatters at your feet
One last raindrop
you couldn’t save
for later

© february 2002

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-06 08:36 PM

(big hugggsssssss) So very sad but well-written, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope that soon your tears will shine with warmth and love and will be replaced with joy and comfort! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

2 posted 2002-02-06 09:01 PM

Thank you Noah. You have a wonderfully kind spirit.

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2002-02-07 01:06 PM

Even one lonely raindrop shares hope.
It can clean the glass of despair,
remove the bitterness of hate,
feed moments of posibilities
and be the path of something new ...

... but most of all, with the right conditions,
it can create a rainbow!!
I am looking forward to seeing that side of you.
Until then .... let it pour.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-02-07 01:12 PM

*sigh* such despair in each raindrop...such pain and loneliness just wanting to be charished..I too, like Craig, hope to see the rainbow that is so beautiful when the sun shines through the raindrops...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

5 posted 2002-02-07 05:18 PM

This has an underlying message to never take things for granted which, unfortunately, too many do...

very good!

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

6 posted 2002-02-07 05:53 PM

Very well written. I look forward for more from you. Cheers.

"You come and go
in and out of my life
like so many rainy days
I am the last raindrop"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

7 posted 2002-02-07 07:46 PM

Thank you all... your kindness warms me.

And Soliel, you see clearly

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-02-07 08:29 PM

enjoyed

Joe Lamando
Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 124
Massachusetts,USA

9 posted 2002-05-30 03:53 PM

It brings me joy to see this poem, similar a bit in the metaphor I used in Hailstorms. Thank you for your kind comments. Nature is beautiful and reflects human nature nicely in its weather.
Hugs,
Joe

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-07-04 09:04 PM

Interesting...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-01-22 03:23 AM

I can sure relate to this..

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