Open Poetry #18 |
Waterfall |
brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Waterfall When I am down and feeling low I have a special place I go With jungle growth and flowers bright Andwaterfall of majestic height That feeds a pool so emerald green As unspoiled as was ever seen With many strains of wild bird's call Amidst the ferns that grow quite tall Where colored, haze-like rainbow mist Through the trees does weave and twist And all the beauty captured here That nature paints so bright and clear Masks the treasure hidden within So sweet and pure and without sin Concealed behind the water's veil At end of a most secret trail Lies a vision ,a beauty fair My mistress, lover lying there With open arms she waits for me To hold me tight and set me free My mistress is nature and my lover, its beauty!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely Brian..very unique..my favorite place to go would be the ocean...so soothing and relaxing to the soul.. ~Victoria~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! May you forever hold her close to her heart and share the waterfall of dreams together, sweet freind, we all love you so much, nature and beauty fill your golden words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Brian, a fine mistress and lover to have! This an exceptional piece of poetry! So beautifully worded! Well dne! Love, Bonnie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Brian, this is very well done and beautifully penned as usual! Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
brian, so beautiful! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very beautiful imagery in this one, Brian. I really enjoyed it. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is quite the heavenly place.. Is it a secret spot? or do you let others in as well?...Nicely done... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brianbeaudry, I'd like to take a dip in that pool myself. Excellent write. Enjoyed |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
What a beautiful place to be, sigh... great poem! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* You know just how much I love waterfalls, Brian...I think I will join you there and embrace my lover too as my lover of nature fills my heart and soul with the magic touch of healing and serenity..I LOVE IT!!!OH YES,,, I LOVE IT!!!**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
Surrounded by romance that showers, a waterfall is the perfect comparison, a first rate metaphor, Brian! Great stuff. Impressive! PB4S |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Brian, you captured everything that I ever envison of a waterfall...I enjoy putting them into my romance writes...Can I borrow this poem...(kidding) |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh now Brian, do you think I like this? Your darned tootin I do,, LOL, this is very very beautiful about a love of mine, nature, great poem. floria Floria |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brianbeaudry - it's nice to have such a place. Mine is on Vancouver Island, and I visit there a lot. Very inspiring... BC |
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