Open Poetry #18 |
Looking for you, Finding me |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Looking for you, Finding me (in memory of Michelle) Trying to find you when the sky sends warm to February and all the scattered down clouds have gone to other grief, I realize, to be sleeveless and skip into your place in time with a smile is not about looking for you, but about finding me. [This message has been edited by Martie (02-06-2002 08:13 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, my friend, the healing has begun... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and my thoughts and prayers are with you always! Time will ease the hurt, always believe in your heart and you will heal in time! We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
May you continue on your journey with good memories always with you... you make a very powerful statement with few words. Wonderfully done. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Holding you gently in loving *hugs*~ You write so very tenderly of Michelle~ I love you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
THis is sigh writing in its best form, Lady. I love it! I am many. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Martie....Hugs to you tonight dear one. ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Martie, This is a wonderful poem about the healing process. I wish you well, my friend. I'm always here should you need me. (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I realize, to be sleeveless and skip into your place in time with a smile is not about looking for you, but about finding me. ============================= and those discoveries are equal to finding hidden treasure. Warm in her light...and see your own beautiful reflection there. love ya sweet poetess |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
((hugs)) tonight, Martie, this is so beautifully written...I hope that you are finding poetry writing and sharing as therapeutic as I am. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Amazing what the little ones can teach us, even after they’re gone. A beautiful piece you have written for her Martie. I’m sure she’s singing it out to the other angels, with great pride. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nicely written...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martie, With such a soothing sigh, I have to tell you how relieved I am for you both as the process has now started. Huge big old Canadian bear hugs to you now and always. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Martie, I looked into your mirror...and there I was. Excellent write. Thanks. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I don't know which is greater... my appreciation for your poetry... or the love for the poet that surged forth upon this tender read. *S* I just know both are immense. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Martie, this is absolutely beautiful. Hugs and Love Dear Friend Maree |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is poignantly lovely, Martie. It reminds me of another poem of yours dedicated to Michelle. Like your new pic too! Cor |
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