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walker
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0 posted 2002-02-06 06:46 PM



In the rain
or in the glow of the moon
you should know
I think of you each night
My days are busy
it keeps me away from myself
But as night falls
memories come
engulfing me in this flame of love
and the unbearable pain that
loving you creates
And I dwell and smile in the hurt
loving you more each time
just know
I think of you each night

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-02-06 07:11 PM




(sigh) I know just how you feel, sweet friend, for I dream of my sweet Joanna every night too and dream of loving her so much! (kiss on cheek) May he always reach you and fondle you with loving care, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

brianbeaudry
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2 posted 2002-02-06 07:26 PM


I feel you pain my friend....sad and tormented words penned into a great poem!!!
Duncan
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3 posted 2002-02-06 07:30 PM


And I dwell and smile in the hurt
loving you more each time
just know
I think of you each night

Absolutely one of your best, walker!  At least we can write through the pain, small comfort...but some.

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4 posted 2002-02-06 08:49 PM


(hugs) very clearly expressed my friend.

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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2002-02-07 10:32 AM


Lovely and sad.  
Well expressed

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

peppermint35
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6 posted 2002-02-08 01:35 AM


You said this so very well.. it is so true that at night.. that's the worst...::sigh::

Wonderful poem

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

Larry C
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7 posted 2002-02-08 01:38 AM


walker,
Incredibly well said...wow!

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8 posted 2002-02-08 02:00 AM


Walker, your heart is beating loudly in this one. You have written so well of the longing, aching pain of love that is somehow just out of your reach.
vandana
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9 posted 2002-02-08 11:07 AM


enjoyed
Dulcinea
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10 posted 2002-02-08 05:13 PM


Your poems are so straightforward, and pack all the punch of "from the heart" that leaves a reader breathless...very well done!
JamesMichael
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11 posted 2002-02-08 05:23 PM


Well said...James
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