Open Poetry #18 |
Just know I think of you each night |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
In the rain or in the glow of the moon you should know I think of you each night My days are busy it keeps me away from myself But as night falls memories come engulfing me in this flame of love and the unbearable pain that loving you creates And I dwell and smile in the hurt loving you more each time just know I think of you each night |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) I know just how you feel, sweet friend, for I dream of my sweet Joanna every night too and dream of loving her so much! (kiss on cheek) May he always reach you and fondle you with loving care, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
I feel you pain my friend....sad and tormented words penned into a great poem!!! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And I dwell and smile in the hurt loving you more each time just know I think of you each night Absolutely one of your best, walker! At least we can write through the pain, small comfort...but some. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
(hugs) very clearly expressed my friend. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lovely and sad. Well expressed Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
You said this so very well.. it is so true that at night.. that's the worst...::sigh:: Wonderful poem Pepper |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
walker, Incredibly well said...wow! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Walker, your heart is beating loudly in this one. You have written so well of the longing, aching pain of love that is somehow just out of your reach. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Your poems are so straightforward, and pack all the punch of "from the heart" that leaves a reader breathless...very well done! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well said...James |
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