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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2002-02-06 06:18 PM

I WAnt to....

I want to sooth you as the dewdrops bathe forget me- nots of blue
As nighttime haze drops honey wetness drizzling in dew
I want to warm you as the rising sun dissolves the morning mist
Opening the petals slowly, waiting to be kissed

I want to touch you as a butterfly would brush its powdered wing
Against the petal softness in the balmy days of spring
I want to kiss you as a humming bird lingers ever near
To honey suckles treasured nectar, sweet and wet and dear

I want to hold you as a morning glory wraps its twisting vine
Around each crevice of the trellis as it slowly grows and winds
I want to love you as raindrops drench each petal of a rose
Bathing it in nourishment, of tender love it knows

I want to be with you forever
In the garden as it grows

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (02-06-2002 07:22 PM).]

Mark Coburn
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 71

1 posted 2002-02-06 06:24 PM

....as I was lying under oak tree an image
came unto me ...and yet I was half asleep and like chaung tzu I wondered is that butterfly the you or is it only the dream?
mark

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

2 posted 2002-02-06 06:24 PM

oooohhhhh lovely... this has everything...flowers, birds, romance. This is better than a chocolate ice cream cone!

Beautiful.

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2002-02-06 06:36 PM

You write romance well with wonderful imagery and flow

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2002-02-06 06:51 PM

Awesome poem, I loved every line. A fine write from a fine poet.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

5 posted 2002-02-06 06:55 PM

Beautiful imagery......loved the way you used nature to amplify the emotions!!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-02-06 07:35 PM

Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your lovely words always shine with romance and gorgeous imagery! May true love forever melt your heart like honey, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-02-06 07:45 PM

SweetLizzieLady~

'I want to hold you as a morning glory wraps its twisting vine
Around each crevice of the trellis as it slowly grows and winds'

I LOVE the thought of being entwined~
Beautiful writing sweet poetess~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

8 posted 2002-02-06 08:30 PM

This is simply divine! Pure poetic bliss all the way around. Beautiful imagery, exceptional rhyme and meter, it's just lovely!

Love,
Bonnie

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-02-06 09:23 PM

This is so delightfully liquid in its wording...and enjoyed so much...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2002-02-06 10:05 PM

Elizabeth,
A lovely lovely.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2002-02-07 01:01 AM

Liz,
And who wouldn't want you to? Wow...irresistable.

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

12 posted 2002-02-07 02:27 AM

Elizabeth, this is entirely satisfyingly beautiful..

::sigh:: perfection

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

13 posted 2002-02-07 04:08 AM

That dear friend was the most tastefully seductive, romantic poem I have ever read, so let me put it this way, if I received it I think I would be jumping into that garden darn fast

Oh this was so lovely Liz! Definitely one of my favorites of yours now.

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. Let the reader
catch his own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

14 posted 2002-02-07 07:33 AM

A lovely garden it is... chock full of perennials for stability.. with a splash of annuals for some fresh new color each year... I'm there..

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

15 posted 2002-02-07 09:04 AM

I've run out of words for praise without sounding insincere!!

Just say.......marvelous poetry!!!

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

16 posted 2002-02-07 10:28 AM

Thank you all so much. Your comments are so much appreciated.
Liz

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2002-02-07 12:15 PM

I want to send this to someone...
I want someone to send this to... *S*

This is beautiful, Elizabeth... flawless. *S*

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